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me_myself_and_i

wrote 1 day ago

well, you could have them fresh out of high school and it could be their year off from school. then in the last chapter or the epilogue you could have them go into their first college classes....
lil better, but im a young adult and i liked it best when they were in college. made me think of my brothers and sisters. made me have a lil bit of respect for em out the gate ya know?

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drsheridan

wrote 1 day ago

Hi, it's drsheridan.
Lately, I've been trying to promote my new story, "The Roses of Cooraclare". It's posted as a short story at the moment, but I will be posting it as a book soon. It's a historical fiction/war/romance novel set in 1920s Ireland. It's a short read and I'd really like some feedback on it. If you leave a comment, I PROMISE i'll read and comment on one of your pieces! thanks!
http://inkpop.com/projects/27695/the-roses-of-cooraclare-excerpt/
Deirdre

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Olajide Adelana

wrote 5 days ago

Hello there?
hope everything is great,,,anywa, just wondering if you could check out some of my poems if it could also made a win to your top pick. I would also love the commenting. Thanks, and i wouuld be glad to return the favor...thanks

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joanamysts

wrote 8 days ago

XD I would've replied to your intro thread but it said it had been dead for several hours now. I'm kinda against reviving threads on a busy forum.

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Joseph Geary

wrote 8 days ago

would you read and comment on one of my poems and if you like them could you put on your watch list or picks. I will do the same for you.

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joanamysts

wrote 8 days ago

I saw you joined Absolute Write :D I'm on there as Mysty, but I'm not incredibly active.

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joelvalentine17

wrote 9 days ago

Hello I have now put up my story! The Truth About Ariel! Would you please read it? :-)Add it to your picks if you like it!

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Dain Broadbent

wrote 9 days ago

By the way, something that Em said in Stumbling Underground keeps making me laugh. She was talking about Big's Buffet and what her poop had looked like after the last time she ate there. Juvenile, but I keep cracking up every time I think about it.

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Dain Broadbent

wrote 9 days ago

Chapter Five is up, too.

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Dain Broadbent

wrote 16 days ago

Chapter 4 is up: you oughta read it, except the end is a mess. But just fugeddaboutit.

Thanks, pally. Oh, and thanks for the pick! I'm honored.

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strive.neveryield

wrote 17 days ago

***BEFORE YOU LEAVE A MESSAGE ASKING ME TO READ/READ SWAP, READ MY PROFILE***

Basically, I don't respond to messages in my inbox asking for reads (unless I'm already reading said work), so please don't try.

~Vi

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Samantha Pentz

wrote 17 days ago

I'd really appreciate it if you read my short story, I can read a chapter of your book if you'd like!

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Alimr

wrote 18 days ago

Hey I was wondering if you would please read my book “Earth, Heaven and the in-Between’s”. I would really appreciate it and I’ll read anything of yours that you ask me too.

Thanks,

Ali

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Urban Storyteller

wrote 18 days ago

hey!
Could you check out my short story "Before I Dreamt" ? It's my first inkpop project
It's really short and I don't think it will take too much time to read!
Thanks 4 the support!
Nicole

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dragona1344

wrote 21 days ago

New poem! Just posted!

Please check out "Ramble for Change" in your free time. Any read or comment is appreciated. Thanks!!!

-Amy

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riotgirl8

wrote 22 days ago

Hey i was wondering if you would like to check out my new book only in your dreams. Its not much but im getting at writing again. I will be happy to return the favor by reading your works too! I love swapping! Just let me know which ones and ill get right to it!
~Sydney or Sydnayay (<- dont ask) :P
Ps this is the first book that started remember me!
Sam and Grey!!!

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writerchick

wrote 22 days ago

Hey, I wanted to see if you'd be interested in a read swap? I will read and comment on yours if you'd be willing to do the same?

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Dain Broadbent

wrote 22 days ago

thanks! no rush.

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hayman

wrote 23 days ago

Hey, i know this is annoying but could you read my poem 'Hit, Squeezed, Broken' and let me know what you think? i really need some feedback! is there anything of yours you would like me to read in return? thanks xx

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teeahhnuhh

wrote 24 days ago

Heyy! I am an aspiring poet/lyricist, & am in dire need of feedback! I also write short stories, but I'm more enthralled with poetry/lyrics. I know some people consider the two one in the same, but I see a difference. Haha. Anyways, I was hoping you could take a look at some of my works. :D & if you'd like I'd be happy to look at some of your works. :] Anyways, hope to hear from you.

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