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Rank 153 (+76)

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12.17.09

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phoenixri... wrote

5 days ago

Hey! Cherry picking is when you stick a favor...

baileyid wrote

5 days ago

Hi! I'd love to swap! lol I'm actually plann...

malicrawf... wrote

6 days ago

Hey yeah i'm not really genre picky lol. I'd ...

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about me

well first off.
i am not here to get to the top five. i am not here to be #1 ranked. i am not here to be mean, put you down, or make myself feel like a better writer. i am here to improve as much as i can, and get (extremely) honest criticism from my peers about my work. i will do my best to give lengthy, detailed comments on people's work. i don't give a rats arse about any of the ranking or top 5 crap that goes on.
thanks for reading that, duckies. now, about swaps....i will look at your story if you ask me kindly. and do not copy paste message me.....its stupid. if you want me to read, at least take the time to give me something genuine...also, i will probably only read something i like. if your story is about vampires, werewolves, angels-on-earth, rediculous loveyness, you probably won't get a reply..which means no. if i do swap with ya, prepare for a lengthy comment...if you put this phrase -> "kawasaki ninjas are beastlyest" in your message, i will move you to the top of my list.
---random reads...i usually find stories upon random and comment on what sounds good. i don't read top 5's usually unless i already read it and it made it. i like to help the buddies down low in the comment area...coz everyone likes comments. if you have 210393720582 comments, i also am not likely to read it as you have plenty of criticsm already, while some people still need it.
---well i got all that out of the way. so here's me.
i'm a rediculously tall almost 16 year old who has blonde moments like theyre going out of style. xd i love smileys. more than that, i love four wheelers. more than four wheelers i love crotch rockets. more than crotch rockets i like motocross. :d i love racing. the fumes of a two-stroke racing quad are good for your soul. i also like drawing and soccer. i go on my quad almost every day. if you like em too, message me! i love meeting other four-wheeler lovers. :3
the kawasaki ninja is my favorite crotch rocket. its best in kawasaki green...which is my favorite color. xd
i love animals, but hate spiders. spiders are not animals. they are devil-creatures.
i dislike twilight and it's twitard spawn.
i also dislike brussel sprouts.
i am random and sarcasm is a second language.
i wrote too muhc already...bye little duckies! don't be scurred to send me a message sometime if we share interests...i do it all the time hah...[b
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people i owe swaps:
baileyid
malicrawford
(this is just for my extremely slow brain. i don't wanna burn anyone)

my websites

my favorites

books

  • Alot, alot.

music

  • Cobra Starship
  • All Time Low
  • 3OH!3
  • We The Kings
  • Fall Out Boy
  • 30 Seconds To Mars
  • A rocket to the moon
  • Never Shout Never
  • Eminem
  • Paramore

film

  • The Lion King(<- Best movie in the history of all time!!!)
  • Avatar
  • Harry Potter
  • Alice In Wonderland
  • Atlantis: The lost empire

my picks

Ashes
Gangs are modern evil. Ella could never be convinced otherwise. That is, until she joined one.

Ashes

by silverherring

Book

Rank 123 (-5)

Beacon
With the sun as her sustenance, Beacon sets out to try to repair her world.

Beacon

by livroselu

Book

Rank 67

Chickenhawk
When nobody is watching, there is no taboo; do onto others what was once done to you

Chickenhawk

by Ashley Renee

Book

Rank 84 (+3)

Chasm
Little did they know there lived a heavy void in the Pharaoh's heart that disguised a broken, burning man...and it was all because of her.

Chasm

by phoenixrising

Short Story

Rank 198 (+33)

my projects

Wings

Book

Rank 1943 (-23)

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Wings

by Jackie MArie

Book: Science Fiction/Fantasy, Paranormal, Romance

Can four teenagers stop science? I didn't think so either.

Once upon a time, science was something to be done carefully, every move planned and outcomes mapped out precisely. That time is gone. Under the noses of entire nations, scientists are creating things that could come out of the nastiest nightmare... or out of a 5 year old's fantasy. Just "messing around". Not thinking about outcomes, consequences, the moves they make. Their carelessness will be costly. More than half of the world would most likely be destroyed. There isn't hope...is there?

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Can You See Me?

Poem

Rank 7909 (-65)

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Can You See Me?

by Jackie MArie

Poem

Random Poem. Read if you like.

This is my first poem I've written outside of school. It's probably not the greatest, but feel free to read it. Comments appreciated.

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Eternity Code ic#10

Poem

Rank 10526 (-79)

Public

Eternity Code ic#10

by Jackie MArie

Poem

A poem for the Forever Contest. Read if you like.

A poem on a view of living for eternity. Only my second poem outside school. Criticism accepted.

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ic#18 Love? No.

Poem

Rank 10526 (-79)

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ic#18 Love? No.

by Jackie MArie

Poem

Contest Entry.

Poem. Not my strongest point, poetry. Its a contest entry, and about love(something i don't enjoy writing about) so its not high on my "what i want read list"

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