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ashleyvictoria

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written 281 days ago

wow-you know i haven't read all of it yet (i need to come back when i have a bit more time!) but this is written beautifully.

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written 289 days ago

i like how you really made readers understand the character's personality-it was very good. typically, i'm not into these types of stories, but i like the tie in with music-i play a few instuments (including piano) so it was cool to read

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written 290 days ago

interesting-i liked it. it's so short though! i would love to read more

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written 293 days ago

i think the last line linked it all together, somehow. good job :)
So...that whole you scratch my back thing-care to check out my story? ;)

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