written 19 days ago

This is a very good story. And I admit at first the whole falling for her cousin thing creeped me out even if its an adopted cousin. But I like where your going with it do you must be doing something right. The only thing I have a problem with is your punctuation. You seem to use it in alot of the wrong places, or not using it at all i.e: ** "I will," he said backing up. Bye." Forgot the parentheses infront of 'bye'. But any way I hope you write fast with this. I really do like it and like I said the story line is good. Keep up the good work by all means necessary.

written 89 days ago

Please write more of this fast. I really like this and it has potential.

written 95 days ago

Hmm, this is good. It hits home for me and it's easy to relate to.

written 101 days ago

I agree with Ashley Though I really would like an update you don't need to rush them. And those other people can cry a river build a bridge and get over it.

written 103 days ago

You have to update this soon. I have an idea of what might happen but I want to know from you. Ahh, I think I'm going to die of axiety if you don't update.

written 107 days ago

The last few chapters you posted. Made me cry. I'm not even kidding you. So in order to keep me from crying over and over again you have to continue this as fast as you can. Please write fast!

written 108 days ago

I've read the first chapter so far. It has a good plot. And I like the characters already. Other than like one or two gramatical errors it's fine. Keep up the good work.

written 113 days ago

I know who it is. It's the lead singer from My Chemical Romance. Good band. Nice poem too.

written 113 days ago

I knew it!! I can't wait for you to write more. So hurry!

written 116 days ago

Okay. I sorta kinda knew what Carsons secret was but I never would have guessed she did this. I love this so much. I hope it goes all the way to the top. And then gets published. ^_^

written 116 days ago

Oh, wow. I know I've said this before but I'm going to say it again anyway. I love your work. Now it might not go on my picks right away cause I'm still trying to organize things on it and my watch list but if I have a spot open I promise it will go on there.

written 116 days ago

I agree with Artemis all the way. And I don't care about the rhyming cause your write it would sound cool and together as a song. Your a great writer. I absoluetly love you work too.

written 119 days ago

I sorta knew that was gonna happen. I don't know how but I did. I can't wait for you to write more to this

written 121 days ago

I love this in a way that might-and very well could-be illeagle. I think that if you don't add more to this soon I will go into a coma. So hurry. I just love everything about this book and cannot wait for more. You have to tell me when you update. Please!!

written 122 days ago

written 122 days ago

Wow, I can't think of anything better to say other than This Should Be a Book. I love it so much and I want to know more about Marissa and Tyler. Mainly about what Tyler didn't tell her though. I just want it so continue so badly I might cry. I hope you add more to it so it's a book.
Mwah*

written 122 days ago

Wow, I can't think of anything better to say other than This Should Be a Book. I love it so much and I want to know more about Marissa and Tyler. Mainly about what Tyler didn't tell her though. I just want it so continue so badly I might cry. I hope you add more to it so it's a book.
Mwah*

written 143 days ago

Okay, don't worry. After about ten million more chapters I think you can end this. Till then write fast. I want to read this untill I can't read anymore on here. Oh and someday you have to get this published and then give me the first book. I'll pay big bucks for this. So HURRY!!!
^_^Mwah

written 148 days ago

Ahh, I hope that Violet doesn't die. Or Ella! Right more please. It is so suspenseful that I think I am about to pass out. Right FASTER please!

written 148 days ago

I love this so far. It's great. It is going on my whatch list and I'll probably put it on my picks once I get an opening. This is just to good not to be put on there.
^_^ Tabby