written 178 days ago

This was remarkable. Beautifully written with a unique, refreshing plot line. I'll keep reading if you continue it.

written 179 days ago

I only had the chance to read the prologue and chapter one, but I'm officially hooked! I love the unique plot idea, and you've executed it really nicely so far. Very well-written. The prologue confused me a little bit, and I wasn't sure what was going on.
But other than that, you seem to have a really good idea of what you're doing here, keep it up and I'll keep reading!

written 181 days ago

I love the rhyme scheme, and how you ignored capitalization. It reminded me a little bit of Emily Dickinson (Haha, because of the puncuation/capitalization). This is really good.

written 181 days ago

I only had time to read the first chapter, and I have to say I'm intrigued. The way you wrote the first chapter leaves a lot to be desired, and it definitely made me want to read more. Very alluring and humorous. I'll keep reading this for sure.

written 230 days ago

I like this a lot. It's very well-written, and the plot is original for something in the vampire/witch/etc. category. I can't wait for more! :)

written 235 days ago

This was beautifully written. It isn't detailed to the point of boredom, but you wrote with a lot of implication and analogies. I really liked it, brava. :)

written 236 days ago

That was so sickly adorable, I might puke. Haha, don't worry, that's not an insult. This was incredibly cheesy, but I love it nonetheless. It was well-written and definitely made me smile. Love it :)

written 239 days ago

I read the first chapter just now, and I have to say, I'm intrigued. I can't wait to read the rest; this is very nicely done.

written 240 days ago

I can't wait for the sequel. I adored the preview!

written 241 days ago

I'm not a big fan of vampire stories, Twilight hype ruined them for me. But really, this was sensational. It was quick and to the point, while leaving the reader (or just me) wanting more. Brava :)

written 241 days ago

Amazing. I literally felt my breath catch in my throat. You really captured the emotion. I felt the anger and upset at first, but it was also one of those "I told you so" things, you know? Haha, maybe that didn't make sense. I love this though, so well-written.

written 243 days ago

Just finished it, and I have to say, I'm a sap for romantic fairytales. I do have a bit of critique, but just my humble opinion. I felt it ended rather abruptly. I would much rather like to have seen how the two families would react to Thor and Araya's relationship.
That's all. I really, truly liked this story. It was well-written, witty, and humorous at times. Brava. :)

written 244 days ago

I love it. I can't wait for the full story version :)

written 244 days ago

Love it :)

written 244 days ago

I love it, I love it so much, it's ridiculous. I'm so glad you joined inkpop. :)

written 245 days ago

I've taught you well, young grasshopper. Haha, just kidding. This is very lovely; I remember you showing it to me a while ago. You're a natural :)