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wrote 23 hours ago
ari!!!!!!!! my rank is less then one thousand, but all my stuff went down!!!!!!! it's really wierd, but it makes me happy!!!!! hey, write more of shadowed sun AND POST IT!!!!!
wrote 2 days ago
Chapter three of Memories has been added :D
Hi. I've just finished a couple chapters of your book. I'm enjoying it. I wanted to see if you would mind reading some of Chasing Normal and letting me know what you think?
Ok, so this message is going out to everyone who read my book and left generally positive feedback. As you’re probably aware, my book isn’t done yet. And as we speak I’m editing the remaining written chapters so I can then post them up here. Then, after I’m caught up, I’ll continue to post later chapters on a monthly basis. My question to you is this, do you want me to give you an update when a good chunk of editing is done (let’s say…five chapters) and when I post a new one? Or would you rather I not do that?Thanks again for your time and feedback.-Shade
Ok, so I am going to read and comment on your story, but I need to find out which one you want me to comment on? Just message me back your pref- and I will get right on it!!Thanks for answering the thread!GG
read it. now. :)
hey! you know on your page where you posted ur quotes, u forgot, "i'm a dragon, i dont do that tonuge thang!"
wrote 3 days ago
i dont know what anime its from. Rene just found the picture on google images, and i thought it wa ssuper awsome. so i used it. hey, i just posted a short story on my page if you wanna read it, it's sorta weird and um, dark. ya.
hey dearie, thx for being my editor. it did change tense a lot. oh well, re-writing. so...did the setting seem familiar? lol
Good day to you,Please support my Short Story entitled "There she goes" The Paradox Journal Series .Its a series stories and this will be the first installment. Its not very long, so it would not cost too much more time. Please do support it, your support is really a big help in my writing career. I will return the favor with gratitude. This story is for you so I hope you enjoy it. Thanks and God Bless.Humbly Asking,Josh xx*Hope I will see this in your picklist---i will be very very happy about it.
I made a big mistake and could really use some help. I accidentally wiped my book, The Wish Thief, off of everyone’s pick shelves and watch lists. If it was on yours would you mind doing me a favor and put it back again? Sorry for the inconvenience and thank you. ~Deanna #P.S. If you haven’t read it yet, please note that I return all reads. Forgive the plug, but when life gives lemons, make lemonade, or something like that. Ha!
who do you think it could be????? its also now my facebook profile pic. and my desktop image. its just soooo cute!
wrote 4 days ago
hey ari, guess what? i changed my profile pic on inkpop 2!!!!!! do you like it? i'll tell you who my sister thought it was when we get back to school.
thank you very much for your comment on my book, "a little too perfect"I took your advice on the prologue thing, I realized that yes, it was a little too rushed and confusing. :)I took out the "she turned _" things, and just added a quote. thanks again!!!!!
Hi there!I'm Izzy, and you might have noticed "Winter Child" is in the top five! This is super-exciting, except I'm starting to slip. A lot. So because of that, I'd love to do a swap with you. If you check out 'Winter Child', I'll definitely look at your work as well (if you'd rather, I can read yours first, just let me know what piece). I do comment for comment in addition to pick for pick (so if you comment and pick my piece, I'll comment and pick your piece).Also, I've done swaps with a lot of people on this site. So if we've already swapped, we can do it again. For example, you could read chapter 2 or wherever you left off, and I'd do the same for your book or read some other short story/poems/etc.Thanks so much!Izzy
wrote 5 days ago
Thanks Arianna! I really appreciate the feedback, it's exactly what I am looking for. I have it out for beta reading right now, so once it comes back I will take another look at what you said in conjunction with their opinion and hopefully I'll be able to smooth things out. I appreciate the honesty, it is always needed, but not offered often enough. Thanks again!Jodi Ann
Well thanks a ton on your input :)I didn't find your advise offending at all! And I needed help with chapter one... I've sorted through the rest, but with your comment, maybe I can finalize chapter one, then re-upload my fully edited book.Thanks again!-Grace
Thank you soooo much for the comment and the pick. Your comment was really helpful. I'm actually glad you focused on the negative because I really want to improve my writing and the story. A lot of the comments I have been receiving say that I need to work on info dumping. I've been trying to cut out information because people say that's there's too much. Sometimes I feel like I'm not giving enough information, but other times I know I'm putting into much. It's a very fine balance...one that I have yet to master. So thank you again for your support and critiquing. Also, I would love it if you could help me edit. Someone who hasn't read the story over and over again will be able to pick out the mistakes. :) loveskate
If you still need an editor im open :)
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