inkpop: The Online Community of Rising Stars in Teen Lit

Avatar for QueenLush1223

Rank 889 (-117)

First registered

01.29.10

Last online

5 hours ago

friends

View all

58 friends

messages

View all
cyc

cyc wrote

8 days ago

Hi, originally, I didn't plan for a sequel b/...

TomW

TomW wrote

26 days ago

Hi there, I know we've swapped already, but w...

drsheridan

drsherida... wrote

88 days ago

hi there QueenLush! would you like to swap? ...

comments made

View all
QueenLush1223

I wrote
88 days ago

Alright, so I read the first chapter and I'm ...

QueenLush1223

I wrote
137 days ago

Wow, this is an adorable story! I would have ...

QueenLush1223

I wrote
147 days ago

update, update, update! I think I'm gonna pa...

comments received

View all
Lovethatbook

Lovethatb... wrote

47 days ago

This story is really cute :) U could make thi...

Kariah

Kariah wrote

49 days ago

Okay wow, this was very cute. Sweet, lig...

Narnia Fan

Narnia Fa... wrote

68 days ago

O.o Wow, Sebastian has serious anger manageme...

QueenLush1223

report abuse

about me

hi guys!!

**not your average story**********************************************************************
i would really appreciate comments that will help me improve the story. fyi, this is my first story over 10,000 words. i'm a little nervous sharing it on inkpop, since everyone are such awesome writers. but i really hope you guys will like it! thanks!
********************************************************************************************************

i'm 13 years old and i am in eighth grade. i'm not very good at writing yet so please give me encouraging comments on what i can do better in my stories. thanks!

fun facts about me:
1. i love to drink strawberry and banana smoothies.
2. i love using bath products from lush.
3. i love playing video games. my favorite game on the xbox would either be left for dead 2 or call of duty.
4. my favorite candy are kit-kats.
5. my favorite shows are lost, saturday night live, pretty little liars, the vampire diaries, glee, and make it or break it.
6. my two favorite actor right now is joseph gordon-levitt. i love him!!
7. when i was younger, i ran into a wall.
8. my favorite color is green or blue, depending on my mood.
9. i really want to go to a prom.
10. i love to shop! shop, shop, shop! i never get tired of it!
11. soccer is my main sport. volleyball is my second.
12. i saw the movie inception twice and it is now one of my favorite movies!

anyway, if you want me to read your stuff, just leave me a message and i'll try to get around to reading it! thanx!! :d

my websites

my favorites

books

  • The Hunger Games!!
  • Fallen
  • Hush, Hush
  • The Immortal Series
  • Alice in Wonderland
  • The Nicholas Flamel Series
  • Pretty Little Liars Series

music

  • I like pop and hip-hop/rap.
  • And classical.

film

  • Howl's Moving Castle
  • Princess Mononoke
  • Spirited Away
  • The Lord of the Rings
  • Castle in the Sky
  • An Education
  • Inception

my picks

The Hard Way To Learn A Lesson One bad boy, one straight-A girl, and a bizarre psychology project that forces them to live together for three weeks... what could possibly go wrong?
Match-Up Set Joyce's all logic. So when the illogic happens - like love - she denies it at all cost.
Tempting the Beast Princess Maeve has been arranged to marry the cruelest king on the continent, who is also her father’s worst enemy. Her task? Kill him.

Tempting the Beast

by ME:D

Book

Rank 196 (-5)

Second Time Around Who said an embarrassing moment goes away after three years?
Summer of Firsts What happens when she can't flip to the last page to see her happy ending?

Summer of Firsts

by cyc

Book

Rank 4

my projects

My Blue-Eyed Boy

Poem

Rank 10453 (-98)

Public

My Blue-Eyed Boy

by QueenLush1223

Poem

My blue-eyed boy, the boy that I love.

A poem that tells the story of a girl's relationship with a certain blue-eyed boy.

view

7 comments

complete

Slowly but Surely

Short Story

Rank 10453 (-98)

Public

Slowly but Surely

by QueenLush1223

Short Story: Romance

Melody is a freak. She sees people's auras, witnessed her best friend's death, and has no friends. Nobody can help her...until Anthony came along.

Melody Hawthorn isn't your normal girl. Her mom says she's special, but Melody knows better. She's a freak.

This is the story of 17-year-old Melody's summer of change. One day, Melody visits her tree and meets a boy. She tries to befriend him, but he shows no interest in her. After the eventful meeting, Melody searches for this mysterious boy. As their friendship progresses to something more, Melody begins to change. Can this boy's love help Melody? Or will it have disastrous effects?

[I had to write this for English class, so I could only use 1,500 words max. I don't plan on writing more, but I hope you like it...even though it doesn't describe much.]

view

3 comments

complete

Not Your Average Story

Book

Rank 3715 (-51)

Public

Not Your Average Story

by QueenLush1223

Book: Romance, Adventure, Science Fiction/Fantasy

What are you going to do when your friend is an assassin, your boyfriend is immortal and you're magical? I have no clue.

Truffle leads an average life, until Stefan turns it all around. Stefan has a secret that he's hiding from her. And no, he's not a vampire or a werewolf. When Truffle is kidnapped by people who are just like Stefan, he must go and save her. Unfortunately, things don't go according to plan. Stefan is taken prisoner and a new guy enters Truffle's life. Sebastian, except he’s Truffle’s prison guard. Just when things seem hopeless, Truffle's friend Alice comes and saves the day, and takes her down the rabbit hole to Wonderland. Alice explains to Truffle that she has the power to either save the world or destroy it because Truffle is a powerful seer. What happens from there? Truffle isn't too sure. This isn’t your average story.

view

5 comments

incomplete

ADVERTISEMENT
ADVERTISEMENT
ADVERTISEMENT

spread the word about inkpop: