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written 166 days ago
I agree. Wonderful piece.:)Maybe ive missed it, considerin ive read this from my phone, but im ambivalent as to the protagonist's purpose. May need to read it over again, and read the other chapters.Good job, tho. :)
written 168 days ago
It was short, but direct. Great poem:)
written 178 days ago
The first few lines were amazing! And an even more epic ending.great job.:)
beautiful. and i even imagined this magical place.:)
I'm on chapter three.I'm not much into love stories, butfrom what I'm reading, it's amazing lmao.It's adorable. lol.
lmfao cute. I'll swing by and check out your story, too. And I'd like it if you could pass my name around a bit ;).I'll do the same, Leira (hope i spelled that correctly). :)
written 179 days ago
I'm only on chapter 3, butit has me wondering what's going to happen withthe characters. good piece. :)
Despite the grammatical errors, it was wonderful :). I completely loved the first chapter.I enjoyed how you said that the moon's radiance was taken from the creature. Good job.I'd deeply appreciate it if you'd check out my poems.Hopefully, I'll have a story up. Thanks.:)
written 181 days ago
Beautiful. Great personification. :)
Hey, I enjoy the imagery inside your story. I'm on Chapter 5, currently. I'll probably be back ;)Hopefully, I'll be havin' some stories up as soon as possible. Keep it up! May even be the top pick on here (after me, of course).:)
written 182 days ago
darkness. Dang, shana. I envisioned your writing to be cute lol.This is good. ;)
I loved the imagery of this poem.I could feel the emotions and see the elegant movements of this ballerina.:)
lol interesting. :)ill have to come back.I'd deeply enjoy it if you'd comment on my projects as well.
Words are just as tangible as you and me!I completely agree.
written 184 days ago
Tranquility seems like it derives from love, doesn't it?Great poem. I can relate. ;)
lmfao.That's malicious!Great job! I completely enjoyed the last few lines!
This poem was beautiful. I'll be reading more; trust me.:)
This was interesting.I'll be coming back to read chapter 2. If i forget, be sure to remind me, if you will :D
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