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wrote 3 hours ago
Hey Ashurrii! I just popped by to tell you that Chapter 2 of Half-Breed is posted! Please read and review if you can! :) Thanks!--PR
wrote 3 days ago
Ooh, you have a bunch of short stories I plan to read this week :D
wrote 13 days ago
Ashurrii,Hey I will re-read SG, I took a hiatus from the website so I haven't been on in a while. I was on so much at first I think it lost it's luster, but I think Im back on...maybeRachel
wrote 17 days ago
I think the comment I left for you is one of the longest I've ever written, in a good way! Typically my long ones are pointing out what needs to be worked on or developed. Not you. But I guess that was going to apparent anyways. =]
I use indeed a lot too! "I have a sandwich for lunch" "Indeed, you do."And I've been saying ideal a lot as well. Less than ideal, quite ideal, really all forms of ideal.Quite the fantastic word? Indeed it is. :)Yes it is lovely! :) (Or should I say, indeed it is. :P) It's like, you're writing an english essay or drowned in homework, but you can always make it back to inkpop and it'll calm things down. :)Yes! I love that feeling, when everythings just clicked and you've figured it all out. It helps to think of the story from another character's point of view. You realize how others would see your main character and it just helps to get to know them more. :D It gets me unstuck a lot of the time.Oooh... that sounds tricky! I thought I wouldnt be able to handle making a fictional setting (I can hardly keep track of real ones! :P) so Say When actually takes place in my neighborhood! Which is kind of cool because the friends who I've shown it to who live here always know where things are, like a little extra treat or something. So it's nice because all I have to make up is the stores. :) You're so brave for taking on that challenge! It sounds like fun though. :)Ahhhh I woke up one night with"dad's orangesdoublecup"on the notebook on my bedside table. I still don't remember what it meant.That's great! I'm going to re-read the whole thing so it may take a while, but it's SOOO good! Congrats on coming back to it! :D:D:D
Backwards Compatibility is SHOOTING up the ranks! You go, girl!As for Dude - that sentence, yeah, it was really cluttered. I tried to make it funnily cluttered, but you're right, it's more awkward than anything else. Mac - yayyy I'm glad he's developing more of a personality than the shitty one I assigned him in the beginning, haha. I tried hard, because I got a lot of critique that I wasn't being fair to him as a character, that I wasn't giving him any redeeming qualities. So I tried to fix that in this chapter. That line, "I don't need you, I want you," was actually said to me, haha. And it was delivered with such passion, with such meaning, it made me immediately angry. And I wanted to get those emotions across in the final scene of the chapter.Anyway, thanks dearie, for always being a better reviewer than I am, haha. I love you soooo much, thanks for motivating me to write more!!
wrote 22 days ago
Hi Ashlie!I'm sorry it took me so long to reply. It's been a little hectic the last couple of days. So busy with family and Chinese New Year. lol. And now school too. Anyways, thanks for letting me know that you updated Guardians. I'll definitely check it out as soon as I can. =)Andrea
wrote 23 days ago
Hey Ashurrii :) Part of chapter 2 for Half-Breed is up. It starts where the the POV changes from Riley to Skye. Review if you can, but remember to make it honest and thoughtful! I should have the complete chapter posted by the end of this week/beginning of next. Thanks for the support! --PR
wrote 24 days ago
Hi, my name is Kent. I write to you wondering if you could read my book, Stories. I know you recive alot of these messages and I'm sorry to add to them but I can thik of no better way to reach out to the people on this site. I ask you to read my book becuase it is a Story (no pup intended) that needs to be shared, and one i have been asked to share. It is mine but not. It is a part of a story, that story being depression. Many people know story but many don't. I ask you to help me spread this story, to you and to everyone. If you'd like to do I read swap, I'll oblige. Just leave a comment, and if you see fit add Stories to your picks (or not). If you have any concerns or questions please feel free to message me. -K
yes, exactly! You're always the first to know, goes without saying :)
:) Hope you enjoy it!
Disappearing Day is back up! This time with an actual fourth chapter! :D
Glad yoy enjoyed the comments - I look forward to reading your views on Mishca : )
wrote 25 days ago
=D I just didn't want to come across as being nitpicky. lol. Then you'd be like.... wth is up with her? Gosh. =P I know exactly what you mean. I haven't uploaded a book on here yet (given that I don't have one to upload =.=) but it's so annoying how you can't just copy/paste and correct tiny mistakes. >_< I really mean it though. Reading, I was like... that's my friends and I. o_Ohahaha. I love how you say "the Boyfriend." lol. Standard is no fun. Psht. Weird is much more like it. ^_^ I don't think you're socially awkward at all. Psht! Anyway, normality is overrated. =P~Jen
=D *happy dance* I'm so glad you liked it. lol. *sheepish grin* I'm sorry if I wasn't that helpful. I know you probably can catch all of the mistakes on your own and they were just simple typos so I didn't want to focus on them that much. =Phahaha. Yeaaaaaaah! My friend is obsessed with WoW. And the other one I mentioned is leveling up on Maple Story. hehe. So I just had to comment on that. lol.^_^ Noooooooo problem.~Jen
>_< Hey Ashurrii, finally managed to leave you a comment... ^_^ even though it's been way too long between picking and commenting. =P I hope you didn't think I just picked it without reading. ^_^ Sorry again for the delay.~Jen
Hey, hey, letting you know...New Ending for Summer Friends!!!If you want, you can check it out.You can start from when Sam comes to her door.It's still raw so tell me what you think :)
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I reaaaaad :D <3You're so awesome. I'm jealous. :)
YAY! I've been waiting for you to update Shadow Guardians FOREVER!;P I can't wait to read the revisions you've done. I really hope this gets to the Top 5 again soon...:D
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