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written 113 days ago

I love this story so much! =)
Fantastic writing and storytelling, and the dialogue is so easy to follow and fun to read. Amazing work!---the story just has an addictive quality to it. =)
Picks! =p

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written 124 days ago

OH MY GOD! This is getting so dramatic! And I'm so happy Lex and Jase finally had a "sweet" scene together, I've been waiting for that for like, four chapters! Aha, thank you so much for being amazing! =)
And Kylie...ahah! Finally, in your face! Eh, I truly dislike that girl, I'm glad Jase chose Lexi over her, even if it was only for one kind of awkward night of pain and throwing up, hehe.. =)

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written 125 days ago

Aha, this is such an amazing story!
This is absolutely hilarious, I found myself laughing from the first sentence! And it's even cooler because my name's chloe as well...ahah =)
But seriously-- you have a fantastic writing technique, it drew me in from the very beginning. This is the first secret identity--girl disguised as boy that I've seen that actually WORKS, and honestly the ranking needs to go up. =)

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written 142 days ago

This was SUCH an amazing story- oh my god, it made me laugh as well as cry =)
I loved it so much, I could just feel my heart wrench out of my chest! It was so lovely and still somehow heartbreaking!
Josh's little quirks made me hysterical for a good 3 minutes by the way...those were just plain hilarious. and the fairy thing? Priceless! =)
Picks list for a fantastic piece of work! =)

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written 143 days ago

Whoa! This was so sad! I really loved it though. It was a total twist ending for me too!
I actually really liked this! for some reason the one single memory of Jason mentioned took my breath away- it was so haunting! Though I'm so disappointed that they both died that way, it was still really powerful! =)
Great job, and sorry it took so long for me to comment! =)

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written 146 days ago

This is such an original storyline- I was completely blown away with both the concept and the writing! =)
I loved it! This is totally going on my picks! =)

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written 147 days ago

This is such an amazing story!!!-- I read nonstop for the LONGEST time (I've actually lost track of time so I can't estimate how long it's been...)
This is such an original take on werewolves--I acutally think it's very clever how you made it your own. People now still think twilight when they hear about werewolves, but yours is just so different that it WORKS! I especially love the scenes where you still follow Kyri and the rest even when they're in the forms of a wolves..it's just...so captivating, and makes you feel like you're a part of the story even more!
By the way, I am IN LOVE with Leo, just saying =)

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written 148 days ago

Okay, so this might be kind of obnoxious of me, but I haven't picked or commented on your work yet, but I've been OBSESSED with it since...3 weeks ago maybe? It's not like I didn't want to, it's just I figured that this would hop up the charts by itself (that's how good I knew it was), and as a trendsetter I could pick it once it got high enough so I could give it the final push into the top 5...is that pretentious of me? I hope not. =)

Anyway, I check back EVERY DAY for updates, and I don't say that about really any book..EVER. This is absolute gold, and it needs to be read by the editors, so I hope my pick gets you higher! =)
Good luck, and KEEP UPDATING!! =) (I want Lex and Jase together NOW! FOR REAL!!....and I want to see Jeffrey and Amber get punched in the face simultaneously....ahah, that's my wishful thinking.)
=)

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written 148 days ago

Wow, what a fantastical story-- and it's even better because I'm french! =) My lovely country, I'm so glad someone's decided to write a story about it! It's making me miss it though! =(
It's so great that someone else likes the history of the sun king, that's actually really cool of you. =) And I'm related to Louis XIV, (very distantly though...through a cousin? I don't even know...)...just a random tidbit. =)

Anyway, on to the actual story, aha. =) honestly I don't think this is because I'm biased, but your story was amazing! I got pulled in from the very beginning and didn't stop until I reluctantly reached the end of what you have so far--I can't WAIT for more. =) PLEASE message me when you update!
This deserves to be much higher up than it is now--picks list! =)

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written 150 days ago

AHAHA, I just caught this on a forum and came over to read it, and god was I pleasantly surprised!! There aren't many projects on here that I've actually laughed hysterically to, and this was by far the greatest! =)
Oh my god, this was amazing! Picks list NOW!

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written 151 days ago

Whoa, that's all I have to say. This was a fantastic read-- it kept me hooked the entire time. =) Honestly this was SUCH a good story, it deserves to be way higher than it already is. =)
And btw, the Aussie language you warned about didn't hinder me at all, so I wouldn't worry about that too much =)

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written 152 days ago

Whoa, I haven't read much but I'm already in love with this. It's fantastic! Picks list right now, and then I'll continue reading, ahah =)
Your writing style flows really well and I think that this definitely is worthy of the top 5. I'm addicted already-- Keep up the freaking amazing work! (Pardon my language, ahah)
=)

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written 152 days ago

This is a pretty interesting story you have here- I've only read a llittle bit so far, but I'm definitely addicted! =)
(Sorry it took so long to get to reading it by the way)
=)

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written 152 days ago

This is such a great story so far! =)
Keep it up, I'm loving it =)

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written 152 days ago

Hey guys, so this was a Valentine's day anthology project that never really got through to the other projects, but here it is anyway. =) I don't really know if it's any good but if people like it I'll post the rest of it soon. =)

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written 153 days ago

This has great promise--I absolutely love it! I can see why it was on the top 5 on authonomy, and I think it really deserves to be recognized as top 5 here as well! The writing style is superb and awfully entertaining to read--keep up the fantastic work! =)

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written 154 days ago

I LOVE THIS!! I've only read a couple chapters, but trust me when I say this is top 5 worthy. FANTASTIC writing and story-telling--- I absolutely adore this so far. KEEP IT UP!! =)

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written 156 days ago

This is an amazing story of what I've read so far! I've been so immersed in it I didn't even notice how much time had passed since I started! Lincoln's character is likable and entertaining, and Joyce is very relatable and I love her! =) You're very talented and I can't wait to read more! =)

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written 156 days ago

This is fantastic so far! I love all your work, but this one is so brilliant, I can't help but pick it right now! =) Amazing writing, as usual, I hope this becomes a top pick soon as well! =)

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written 156 days ago

This is such an amazing book so far! I'm really enjoying myself. =) Adding to my picks now, but I'm going to keep reading! =)
Love it!

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