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Rank 8409 (-66)
Word Count
106
Date submitted
01.11.2010
Date Updated
07.07.2010
by kathylopez23
Poem
The choices we make decide our lives.
This poem is about the choices I have made in my life.
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wrote 48 days ago
This really is quite sad that you have had to endure though all of this, but I have to say that I love it. It is deep and personal, and that is something I have always admired in a writer of anything. Your imagery is very descirptive, and it makes it very easy to follow where you have gone and picture it inside the mind. Really, it is quite amazing.
wrote 205 days ago
This is sad when considering this is about you, but it is a favourite of yours (for me). I love the imagery you used, and the comparisons (valley, fork, field, etc). I really enjoyed this poem :) If you want to get published faster, why not look into self publishing? Try local publishing agencies (small ones) or look into sites like Authorhouse (more for large projects, but it's worth looking into).
wrote 208 days ago
Just finishing up with the deal... I really liked this. Really deep and really sweet at the same time. I am really glad I read this. Good Job!!!!
wrote 234 days ago
Is this a reference to the Psalm about the Valley of Death? Is this why you capitalized "Valley"? I wasn't sure. " . . . because of his shadow cast." Awkward-sounding sentence. Also, I wondered about "his". Who is this "his"? Was this referring to Satan? Regardless, I wanted "his" to be more defined. " because (Satan's, Fate's, Past's . . . ) shadow cast". Feel free to ignore my suggestions. This is your baby and I'm far too opinionated at times.
wrote 237 days ago
"Where are all my findings?"---love this!!!"no reason to be thankful"---so true, great!"The fork I chose"---nice"Days feel like hours"---goodWell done! Some really great things in here! ~Morgan :)
this is really good too, sounds really familiar though, Robert frost? i think thats who wrote something like that, but you can tell its origonal because its not as formal i still love it, sorta motivational.
wrote 238 days ago
I'm picking up what you're putting down. Very easily relatable and nice imagery in the choice of words.
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