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97

Date submitted

01.20.2010

Date Updated

07.17.2010

Love Is What Keeps Me Living

by childofthenight92

Poem

Some may say that the beat of my heart keeps me living.

That the blood running through my veins is life.

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NewMagicWeaver

wrote 133 days ago

I love this poem! It is very sweet and beautiful! It reminds me of a song, and I love how you compare love to the things people say keep u living. "blood running through my veins is life"... "your love is blood running through my veins." I like these lines! Very meaningful! =D

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Katie Louise

wrote 152 days ago

Beautiful poem, very emotional love the words :) x

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krims

wrote 155 days ago

this is an amazing poem. i love the comparison: the beat of your heart, your blood, the air you breathe vs. love
good job

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Chloeanna

wrote 156 days ago

Emotional and ver beautiful love your choice of words

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Heather Marie Tumbleweed

wrote 157 days ago

very beautiful, very emotional, i love the word choices! *thumbs up*

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Rasheeda S Boo

wrote 184 days ago

Great poem! You show how much you really care about this person!

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