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Rank 3851 (-66)
Word Count
589
Date submitted
01.22.2010
Date Updated
01.31.2010
by AriannaR
ShortStory: General Fiction
IC#4- so heres the plan. my entry
IC#4 entry. In a situation like Anya's, there should always be a plan. It's when there isn't one that things go awfully wrong.
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wrote 189 days ago
this is demented, but its my entry! thx if u comment!
wrote 154 days ago
um, sara.... do u need to talk??????????????
wrote 157 days ago
Arianna, this greatly disturbed me. I think I had a look of horror on my face the entire time I read it. Which obviously means you wrote it extremely well. Very evocative. I was THERE and I was horrified and I was relieved when she stopped him; yet grieved for her as well. Very powerful prose. ~ T
wrote 181 days ago
wow...i absolutly love this. i know that sounds demented, but i mean i love the emotion and drama involved. i think he deserved the death anya gave him. good for her.
Yeah, you're right, it is demented. well written, quite scary. The last line finishes it off quite well.keep writing!arty :-)
Emotionally this is amazing, me being the qeasy idiot that I am gagged at the ending but what alternate option did the girl have? Great powerful writing even if the topics not my favorite.
This is very good. I would have liked to see it a bit longer and more explained, but it was nice.
Distrubing, yes, but powerful.
you're right it is kind of demented, but I still likd it lol
wrote 190 days ago
You're right. There should have been a plan. But a plan wouldn't have helped. Only action could have saved them both. Emotionally this is an excellent piece.
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