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Rank 3851 (-66)
Word Count
18922
Date submitted
01.24.2010
Date Updated
by peanut081981
Book: General Nonfiction, Mystery
When Jacob and Abigail disappear, will their children be able to keep up the charade?
When the Blackstones disappear, their four children are left wondering what happened. As the summer comes to an end, they are forced to pretend nothing has changed in order to stay together. Will they make it? Or will the pressure of keeping quiet about their parents, and their feelings of loss force them to bring in the authorities? *I am still writing this, so please bear with me.*
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wrote 182 days ago
i read through the first four chapters. on the technical side i really didn't see anything "wrong"your story flows well to be honest i am always looking for a crazy busy story with lots of turns and twists. i just didn't feel it with your story. maybe it's just me because it is really well writtenmy only advice is to spice it up a bit morei hope it helpsd;
wrote 186 days ago
ok i've added you to my WL aka my reading listtakes me a couple of days. i load up with a lot of different people's work and comment all at once. trust me i always read. just take a look at all my comments. ok, maybe wait on that i'm nice but honest loltalk soond;
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