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Rank 9581 (-85)
Word Count
136
Date submitted
01.29.2010
Date Updated
by errickagrace
Poem
songs of my heart
errickagrace2009
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wrote 124 days ago
Who is Inoue? In any event, this is a very lovely poem, about perhaps more than just rain yes? :-)Your friend,Kevin WongAuthor of Heroes of Destiny
wrote 157 days ago
Your ending is fantastic! This is a very unique poem.
wrote 172 days ago
I like how you say youd write about rain not love, but that in writing about rain you're writing about love.
wrote 175 days ago
I love rain too!! Ok, but besides that, I really really like this piece. I love the line: I smiled at the beauty of destruction. It really makes the reader think about their perception of rain too. Which is always good! Good Job!
wrote 180 days ago
Very well written. It gets a bit iff-y in places, your description is wavery and drippy, but of course in a good way that flows with your style. Love is what I feel when i see the rain and you balance it perfectly. Very good tone, well done. Live long and prosper-Drew
Finally! Someone else who connects rain with love. I feel the same way about it. So often we get those writers that only think rain pertains to the depressing aspects in life. I'm absolutely in love with how you depicted this! Rain captures the emotion within a soul, and I think you explained that thoroughly well through this piece. Bravo! I'm in awe ^_^
this gets off track a few times, but the deep meaning is clear. mixing love of nature and people and the world around you into one work of only 130+ words. I love the rain aswell, and am very fond people as long as theyre nice. this is quite easy to relate to, so u earn top marks!
This is actually pretty interesting, in my mind.It connects a few meanings into one poem, thought they aren't one hundred percent clear. Which is a good thing for a peom, because poems aren't supposed to be clear! There's a mixture of what things you love, the people you love, and another essence that I couldn't distinguish. I love the rain, too, though. It's such a peaceful thing when trying to fall asleep. When it rains when I'm in bed, I always feel so warm and safe and comfy. It's awesome. I especially like thunder storms.Great job with this poem. :)
wrote 183 days ago
this is deep
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