Book Jacket

Rank 6 (-5)

Word Count

66582

Date submitted

01.30.2010

Date Updated

03.10.2010

The Importance of Getting Revenge

by Mandybeth

Book: Romance, Humor, General Fiction

She wants revenge. He wants the hot cheerleader. Pretending to date each other could give them both what they want. Or then again, maybe not...

16-year-old Lexi Turner has just been dumped by her boyfriend of two years...on the day she was going to, well, "do it" with him. And to make matters worse, he dumped her for a life-force-sucking demon!

Devastated by this turn of events, she decides there is only one way to deal with the situation: get revenge!

Enter Jase Holloway, Lexi's former childhood friend and adversary to her ex. The plan is so simple: just (somehow) talk Jase into pretending to be her boyfriend for a while to make her ex-boyfriend jealous, make him regret dumping her and to make him come crawling back to her on his hands and knees, begging for forgiveness...

Okay, well, maybe not the last part. But with Jase on board, Lexi is confident she will get the revenge she feels she deserves. But life - and love for that matter - is never that easy, and Lexi will soon find out firsthand that sometimes what you want is not always what you get - and that sometimes what you get is what you really wanted all along.

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trickylullaby

wrote 4 days ago

Why why why did no one turn me on to this story sooner? I am in love with this story. I have never been hooked by a story the way I am with this one on this site. It reads like a book I could have plucked out of the Young Adult section of Borders. I love the tone of the story and the fact that it stays consistent from chapter to chapter. The voice of it is seems genuine to the character, reads smoothly, and is believable for the age range. Some people get one or even two of those things but you really nailed all three, I am so impressed. The structure is great.

In terms of the story itself I think you've put together a new and fresh twist on what can sometimes be a repeated plot. There are stories out there that are very boy breaks up with girl for pretty bitch, girl seeks revenge but falls for new boy in the process, girl reassesses things. This isn't like that at all. This takes you for a journey and throws you bumps in the road and twists and turns that you need to buckle up to enjoy. It's phenomenal.

This is a story that can really succeed in the ya world and I see it going amazing places. Of course it's getting on my picks and I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!

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flying2far4u

wrote 4 days ago

Okay, so this might be kind of obnoxious of me, but I haven't picked or commented on your work yet, but I've been OBSESSED with it since...3 weeks ago maybe? It's not like I didn't want to, it's just I figured that this would hop up the charts by itself (that's how good I knew it was), and as a trendsetter I could pick it once it got high enough so I could give it the final push into the top 5...is that pretentious of me? I hope not. =)

Anyway, I check back EVERY DAY for updates, and I don't say that about really any book..EVER. This is absolute gold, and it needs to be read by the editors, so I hope my pick gets you higher! =)
Good luck, and KEEP UPDATING!! =) (I want Lex and Jase together NOW! FOR REAL!!....and I want to see Jeffrey and Amber get punched in the face simultaneously....ahah, that's my wishful thinking.)
=)

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Sarah

wrote 1 hour ago

You’re only a SIX really, really now. Come on where are all the people who are blind to your story. Is there a way to campaign or at least advertise for more people to PICK it, seriously? This needs to be viewed by the board and PUBLISHED!

This story has gotten far since you started posting in January, and I love it greatly. TIOGR flows smoothly and the progression is thoughtfully drawn out. Its not one of those rushed stories nor is it being unnecessarily drawn out. You have the perfect combination that makes me feel bad for not buying it in published book form. I also like the fact that you update quickly so the suspense and the need for more aren’t too unbearable. You also have a sensibility to the writing, which I enjoy. You don’t stop time when she is having inner reflections and the book world continues to move around her. This makes it more realistic and the readers don’t loose track of what’s going on around her because you bring it all back with Lex. I personally like that since first person is extremely hard to write in without losing detail. The dialog doesn’t break up or hinder the work in fact I absolutely love the witty humor that you use.

Now that the technical stuff is done and said with, Oh MY GOODNESS!!! Is Lex finally going to admit to her feelings for Jase? Seriously the more I read your story the more I am confused about how Jase feels. Because my logical all knowing bookworm self is like “Oh he so totally liked her since they were kids.” But then you throw Kylie in the mix and I have to scream, “No that is not how it’s suppose to be!” Which is a very good aspect to keep the readers guessing. Absolutely love the relationships between MC and SC. Finally, Eric, poor, poor, Eric, I adore the sweet best friends who have the sub-love story.

P.S. I cannot fine a single thing wrong with this novel, but that is just my bias opinion.

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lel

wrote 1 hour ago

Love, love, love it! This story is so adorable and totally unpredictable. The characters are hilarious, cute, and I'm completely in love with them haha. Can't wait to read more!

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InconstantMoon

wrote 1 hour ago

I absolutely love your main character! Your voice is prominent and I love where your story is going. Don't want to read too much cuz I know I'll get sucked in. Great work!

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Beautiful Disaster

wrote 2 hours ago

LOVE IT!! :D great chapter!! I just wish Jase felt the same way. I think he does, he's just so hung up on Kylie that he refuses to feel the love too.

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Della Brezza

wrote 3 hours ago

As I always say, great job. I liked this chapter a lot, it had a little more Jase/Lexi in it. She's finally beginning to realize... just maybe... she likes him?

I want to read more! I'm addicted to this book. You write it so well, and you end each chapter in some sort of suspense. I have to hand it to you, you're a great writer.

I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I hope that's soon. :)

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WendySue

wrote 3 hours ago

Ha! Right off, I'm hooked by the mc's voice in those first lines. Hilarious!
hand-me-ups - classic!
Seriously, I can't find anything to criticize. This reads seamlessly like something already published. It's very enjoyable. I love the mc immediately, and I want revenge for her! Trish is equally awesome, and there's a definite hook at the end of the first chapter, which makes the reader want to continue (that's tricky to achieve, so good job!).
I have to stop here, for now. This will be going on my Picks later today when the timeframe opens.
Best of luck! :)
Wendy (Angel Prophecy)

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blueview

wrote 3 hours ago

awww :( Lexi's falling hard for Jase!! that is so cute. I want Jase to let go of his 'love' for kylie!
anyway, you're almost in the top 5: can't wait till you get there!!

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ikuandi

wrote 4 hours ago

added to PICK

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WriterForGod

wrote 4 hours ago

This is such a cute story!!! I love it! Most of the time high school romance stories annoy me (I read murder mysteries and stuff like that) but I really like this. I don't know what caused me to click on it but I did and it hooked me right away. I think I like it because Lexi is the average teenager who isn't the most sought after girl in the school who I can relate to. I was so hooked and read it so fast that I didn't have time to look for mistakes but normally I recognize them even without looking for them so this is really well written. So I really hope you post more soon and this is definitely going on my picks!

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Zohra

wrote 5 hours ago

Love the update! you can tell Lexi is starting to fall for Jase >.<

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!Mwah*

wrote 13 hours ago

Okay, don't worry. After about ten million more chapters I think you can end this. Till then write fast. I want to read this untill I can't read anymore on here. Oh and someday you have to get this published and then give me the first book. I'll pay big bucks for this. So HURRY!!!
^_^Mwah

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madgirl13

wrote 15 hours ago

OMG! This is such a cute book! Its kinda predictable but that's what makes it a cute and awesome story! I love Jase and Lexi, there characters are really fun! Oh and can't forget about the lovely Trish, hahaha! I love this book and I can't wait to read more of it. Just to let you know, I'm totally adding this to my pick's list! :D
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! Hope you update soon! cause the faster you do the more people will read! :D

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dobbytheninja

wrote 22 hours ago

Um, likelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelikelike... this is freaking amazing. Aghhh, Jase and Lexi sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. Hahaha, this is so much fun.

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ScarlettSk3tch

wrote 23 hours ago

this is such a good book so far, I've enjoyed every bit of it!
I love Jase, and even Jeffery. However, there are some things tht annoy me a bit. It seems that Jase is a guy who's relaly confident, well, he shouldn't be a bit too soft, and let his gaurd down around Kylie. Also, Lexi is suppose to be a "tough girl", she's not exactly susppose to want guys to help, especially after her break up( thts wht I think), I think tht
she keeps on agreeing with Jase too fast and too much. She needs to stand up for herself a bit more, and show who she reallie is. Other than tht, awesome, AWESOME, job, I've loved it so far, and it's on my pick list. I loved how Eric acted so defensive, so hawt and super cute! HEART, HEART HIM!

Anyways, add more, and your doing great so far!

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lit.lover

wrote 1 day ago

This story i so interesting, i can't wait to know what happens next.you should know that i check constantly for updates. I have to know the end. Keep updating!

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abbiiex33

wrote 1 day ago

OMG not even lying im in love with your story! I almost got detention today becuase i saw that you had updated and i ran to the comuter and screamed. Yeahh my science teacher didnt like that much. but it was worth it! love, love, love, love , love This story. Im actually going crazy that there isnt more to read. LOVE IT! did i mention i love it? lol <3

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ChacingUnicorns

wrote 1 day ago

REALLY AMAZING![:
ADD MORE![:

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Stephanie87

wrote 1 day ago

Perfect writing. Easy to read, gets my attention. I'm not really keen on the plot, but the way you write it, makes it hard to look away. :) I'm going to read more. Great job!

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ToastyEmoNinja

wrote 1 day ago

I have always hated girly sounding stories, but something about yours just pulls me in. I like it. Maybe cuz it has to do with revenge. lol You're a good writer though. First chapter, read. Now on to the next chapters!

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Tracy McCarthy

wrote 1 day ago

Read all chapters.
I want more. Lots, lots more. :)

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Socoolsav

wrote 1 day ago

Ahhh the 18th chapter was sooo good, I can't wait to keep reading!!

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RoseEsposito

wrote 1 day ago

LOVED the 18th chapter!

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RoseEsposito

wrote 1 day ago

LOVED the 18th chapter!

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gabbwee

wrote 1 day ago

updat.update.update.UPDATE!!! If you don't i could end up in a insane asylum because i am glued to the moniter clicking in an empty space that SHOULD hold another chapter. HOW COULD YOU!!! i really hopes Jase becomes smarts and falls in love with lexi because if he doesn't i will personally come into this book and slap him silly. He is such an Artard.

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The Hippie

wrote 1 day ago

Love this! Love the humor, dialogue, story, characters. Everything! Super well-written, definitely rotating it onto my picks when i have shelf space. In the meantime I am going to simply read and enjoy.

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JasmineNicole

wrote 1 day ago

I LOVE this story. I actually feel like I've just checked this out of my city's public library or something. Its progressing so well too; you never write anything meaningless and keep to the storyline. And you make it unpredictable. I've been watching for signs of Jase falling for Lexi but he seems head of hells for Kylie. Great writing and your grammar is splendid.

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ily:)

wrote 1 day ago

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loveeeeeee ♥ chapter 18!! I do hoep they end up togetherr!! Updateee sooonerrr!! :D

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atln

wrote 2 days ago

I fell in love with this work. Really, as a writer, I loathe cliche and sappy teenage love stories, just love stories in general. Yet.... I find myself strangely attatched and addicted to this book, logging in everyday for any updates.
I love this story so very much.
-fangasms-

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Lycanthrope

wrote 2 days ago

This is great so far. Lexi is such a sweet character, but with a friend like Trish (not a bad friend, before i say this comment. She's awesome) I can totally see how she got sucked into plotting revenge. I wonder why Jeffrey decided to be with Amber... Huh
Adding this so my picks. (If you have the time, it would be great if you could check out Darkest Ebony)

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Beautiful Disaster

wrote 2 days ago

OH MY GOD!! :D I LOVE IT! I'm ready to slap some sense into Jase! Be a good bf!! jeesh.

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Della Brezza

wrote 2 days ago

Yes, you updated today! Maybe another chapter tomorrow??

Anyway, this chapter was just stock full of action. First off, I don't think Lexi should've let Jase off the hook that easily... Maybe she's beginning to realize her feelings for him? It certainly seemed so from the last line of the chapter. Jase confuses me sometimes... he's so into Kylie, but then he acts like he acts Lexi too (sometimes)... I do realize that he's a player, it's easy for him to charm girls, and we are getting all this from Lexi's POV...

What Eric did was just so... I don't know... gallant? Haha, I sound dorky. But that's how I felt... He wanted to protect Trish, in a way.

This just heightens everything, now. And I love the way you don't have one chapter dedicated to just the party... the party's divided into several chapters, and each of them has its own purpose. It also bumps up the suspense level, too... Which is why I'm begging you to update VERY soon!

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blueview

wrote 2 days ago

yay!!! finally: the real kiss!
i wonder if Jase also liked it...

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MonsterGirl

wrote 2 days ago

You have a lot of clipped and run-on sentences. Remember, these are deadly and can make your work hard to read. You can never be too careful when lookiing out for run-ons. I can't really find a personality in you mc. She's pretty much an empty hole that helps tell the story. Every character has a flaw or two, now that's my advice.

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MonsterGirl

wrote 2 days ago

First chapter:
You have a lot of clipped and run-on sentences. Remember, these are deadly and can make your work hard to read. You can never be too careful when lookiing out for run-ons. I can't really find a personality in you mc. She's pretty much an empty hole that helps tell the story. Every character has a flaw or two, now that's my advice.

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a hot little mess;

wrote 2 days ago

LDKJALKDJFALKDJA. OH my goooooddddddddddd. This is so friggin amazing. Chapter eighteen? Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes. I can't even form coherent sentences right now.

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rainshadow

wrote 2 days ago

Please update :P

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gabbwee

wrote 2 days ago

I love It! pure awesomeness. and even though it is a common subject you make it unique!!! Pick list for sure!

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GirlInTheBeanie

wrote 2 days ago

'mazing. simply a-maze-ing. cant wait for more!! =.=

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ily:)

wrote 2 days ago

I Love your story!! :) ♥
I really do hope that Jase and Lexi end up together!

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Della Brezza

wrote 3 days ago

You have no idea how badly I've been waiting for chapter 17! YAYY!

Well, got that out of my system... haha. I loved the beginning when Lexi refers to Trish as her soon-to-be-disowned-best-friend. As I've mentioned thirty thousand times before, I love her personality.

And... what are the odds that Jase's bottle lands on Kylie? Of course... Lexi should just realize her feelings for Jase already...

Speaking of the devil, how could Jase lie to her? Not cool. But I love the cliffhanger you left us at, total suspense there. Can't wait for chapter 18. Great job. :) Looks like you might be able to make it to the Top 5 soon. :)

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a hot little mess;

wrote 3 days ago

AAAACCHHH. Jase needs to get the hell out of love with Kylie, because he and Lexi are SO perfect, it makes me want to cry. I love your characters so much; the drama is just like OOOOH. And hey, if Lexi doesn't want Jase, I'll be more than happy to take 'em. :P

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abbiiex33

wrote 3 days ago

noooooooooooooo is all i can say! i got to the end of chapter 17. seriously you are AMAZING!!! love it

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polina aronova

wrote 3 days ago

omg do u have any ideaaa how much i love this story?!! i first found it on quizilla a long time ago and then u got rid of it and put it up on worthyofpublishing and now its on here. like holy mother of god, i totally miss this storyyyy. im so glad i found it again haha post more soon plzzz. lots of love :)

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dobbytheninja

wrote 3 days ago

Hahaha! YES. This is freakishly amazing! I totally screamed at my computer screen when Jase was snogging Kylie. I wish Jeffrey could have been there! I NEED MORE. :))) Spectacular.

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Angels Whisper About Me

wrote 3 days ago

Ohmigosh!!! I totally want to kill him to!!! Orrrr maybe I just wanna makeout with, I dunno. : D
Give me moreeeee

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blueview

wrote 3 days ago

i love the end of the new chapter, but i'm starting to wonder if Jase and Lexi will end up together. i really really really want them to, but it doesn't seem too likely now :S
please update soon. i literally come on inkpop every single day to check for an update for this. this is the only book i've ever done this for. please keep going!!

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Beautiful Disaster

wrote 3 days ago

oh my GOD!! :D MOREEEEE! :DD i'm ready to kill Jase, too

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Angels Whisper About Me

wrote 3 days ago

I loveeee your story!!

And I'm in love with Jase, I really wish that Lexi and him were together.
It feels like I'm Lexi when I am reading this story, like so real.
I love how you write!!

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DD

wrote 3 days ago

picked back with comments
soon
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stargazer0966

wrote 4 days ago

Wow, this is amazingly entertaining and well written and good. I love the plot and think it's very creative, and even though I've only read the first chapter, I think it has a lot of potential. It kept my attention the whole time (which is hard to do, so kudos, hahaha). Great job, and amazing cover! how did you do it? Haha, GOOD JOB! :D
~Ash

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