AmyMN28

wrote 37 days ago

There are so many young girls who will be able to relate to this. (I know I could at one time.) Bravo for creating something that almost everyone can connect with. The question at the end.."I ask the stars "god is perfect he created this ar, but whyd he create the one to break hearts?" is a version of a question we've all asked about something in our lives. "God, why?" Great job of pulling us in with emotion. Thanks for sharing this on inkpop with us, and thanks for agreeing to swap with me. I'm off to read more of your poems now. Be expecting more comments soon. Best wishes. :o)
Amy

diane_stiffler

wrote 44 days ago

I think everyone that reads this can relate to some part of this. :)Diane

alinapro

wrote 163 days ago

blackromance1892

wrote 171 days ago

ohhh dear. :/

that was really good. :D