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Rank 9584 (-119)

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1413

Date submitted

02.13.2010

Date Updated

02.13.2010

Anna's Box

by lilpoet222

ShortStory: General Fiction

A childhood memory haunts her until her dying day.

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Jessica_Treadway

wrote 121 days ago

This is good :) I know I'm not the one writing it, but if I were, I would make it longer... add more into it; make her overcome her fear and hate and bitterness in a different way, suicide isn't the answer to anything.

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cowgirly16

wrote 153 days ago

i love this
its brilliant
i like how you give snips of the past. . .
like you dont play it all out straight up at the beginning
excellent job!

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Renaissance Girl

wrote 160 days ago

This really hit home. Nice work.

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Nechama

wrote 162 days ago

wow, it's good but a bit confusing but good all the same.

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