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Rank 9586 (-121)
Word Count
177
Date submitted
02.18.2010
Date Updated
02.26.2010
by iwillbeyoursky
Poem
I had something to hide.
Can't keep it a secret anylonger.
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wrote 150 days ago
that was goood !
wrote 151 days ago
This is really good. I love the message in it: be yourself even if it's the person your parents (or someone else) doesn't want you to be. Or at least that's the message I got from it.Great job. I really enjoyed how you wrote this. The use of bold and italics was very interesting.Keep Writingkate
This is really great! I like it. Great Job. I like how it rhymes off and on.
wrote 152 days ago
Wow! A very different poem out of all that I have read. Nice work!
wrote 155 days ago
This is intense! I love how you use italics and bold to emphasize ecrtain parts. That's really awesome! 3rd stanza, you say 'know' rather than "now" anyways, good job! please look at my hsort story, "just us" if you haven't already!
wrote 161 days ago
wow, its really good. ... for real.
wrote 163 days ago
LOVE IT,You amaze mee.Love, Laura.
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