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Rank 4325 (-49)

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139

Date submitted

10.03.2009

Date Updated

10.03.2009

Love and Sanity

by Yume-chan

Poem

Give me back my sanity!

The way I've been feeling for a while now...

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mawll234

wrote 36 days ago

Awww! Incredible. It was haunting, inspiring, and so true. You have so much talent; Just LOOOOOVED this!

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Sidney Gatto

wrote 42 days ago

i like it it the truth

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Cathereno

wrote 101 days ago

I LOVE this! It still flows smoothly even though it doesnt rhyme, which takes a lot of skill! The last five lines are genius. Great job!

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darktruth94

wrote 129 days ago

That was really different and I really liked it. I really admire people who can write poems cause I can't write a poem to save my life.

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!SmartCookie!

wrote 182 days ago

Pretty cool and enjoyable to read! Wondering if u would check out either of my poems and comment because I would highly appreciate it. Keep writing!

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LariAbreu

wrote 199 days ago

Amazing
i've been feeling the same way

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hsscricket

wrote 227 days ago

Awsome!!

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photosnapper

wrote 246 days ago

WooT! Amazing!! :]

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Rainfeather

wrote 324 days ago

i <3 this! so good!

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Arya

wrote 327 days ago

That was great! I could really see that put to music in a song.

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CrazyontheInside

wrote 337 days ago

Wow, I love this. I know exactly what this is talking about it, but have never really been able to put it down on paper. Good job!

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