HarperCollins

wrote

Firstly, allow me to say that I was astounded by both the maturity of your voice and the deftly woven narrative you have created. For so young a writer these are quite unique and a clear sign of your commitment to the characters you have created and the mythical world in which their narratives unfold. You clearly have a marvellous imagination.

FIRST, TO DREAM OF LOVE sits nicely within a ROMEO AND JULIET tradition of literary romance. Born not only to conflicting families, but on the opposite sides of a raging conflict of good versus evil, the love between Eliza and Michael has the potential to heal a troubled realm, or destroy them. Their relationship would, I'm sure, hold great appeal to readers dissatisfied in the wake of Twilight. However, there is another dimension to these characters, created by the involvement of guardian angels in orchestrating their match, which is interesting for the reader to observe. (These guardian angels are, in fact, my favourite thing in the story. I think the idea of a guardian angel's heartbeat making the sound of a harpist playing is truly poetic. I do feel, however, that proper names, rather than "my guardian angel", would be more effective)

My only problem with Eliza and Michael's romance is actually the characters themselves. They are not quite convincing enough to be endearing. This is largely because of the way they speak to each other (repeatedly calling each other "my love") and, indeed, the way they speak in general. Frequently, the syntax used is jarring for a reader. For example, one character says "you did this not", rather than the more natural "you did not do this". Even taking into account the Arthurian tradition from which you clearly draw—as so many of your fans have noted—this seems slightly ‘forced'. Language is one of the principal weaknesses of this manuscript. The issues that are addressed—nature versus nurture, family, the roles of women—though large, are also universal and will resonate with a very broad readership. However, they are presented in a language that is quite archaic, which makes it difficult for the reader to relate. Assuming you want your writing to reach a mass market, I think this is something that would need to be addressed.

This is not to say you do not write well. On the contrary, your command of language is highly sophisticated. There are sparks of real brilliance in this narrative - the description of the aligned sun and moon in Chapter 51 is a particular favourite of mine. The opening two sentences of the prologue are equally excellent, and really hook in the reader. There is, however, a tendency for sections to seem overwritten. For instance, occasions where rhyme is used multiple times within single paragraphs, even single sentences, of prose can come across as affected. The opening sentences of chapter 2 are a prime example of this: "I breathed death that night. I was still too young to fight; I could see them take flight". The rhyme is slightly over-the-top.

For the most part, however, it is just a matter of economy: "I breathed death that night" is an excellent opener, very evocative; it would stand alone and does not need to be reinforced with rhyme. In general, I feel that toning down the elaborate nature of the descriptions and speeches in the novel would make it much more effective and accessible. Moreover, close pruning, as with all manuscripts, would be valuable. You construct some lovely imagery; however, sometimes the same images are over used throughout the novel. One example is the description of gently brushing away dried tears, which features twice in the third chapter, and on other occasions later on. The original description is sensitive and well expressed, but with its repetition the image grows stale. Perhaps this was meant as a motif, but the effect is slightly heavy-handed.

To return to the issue of characters, being as they are so vital in epic narratives: relating novels through first-person narratives is almost always problematic. In FIRST, TO DREAM OF LOVE, where you plot so many different stories, it is particularly so. Using a third-person narrative would help create more coherence between these different threads of the story. It might also help with the rapid introduction of so many characters early in the novel, which at the moment is slightly confusing. Saying this, I really like the first-person perspective of Eliza's guardian angel; threading this throughout a third-person narrative might be an effective way of using a first-person voice, which you do well, and at the same time emphasising the supremacy and sanctified nature of the angel.

Clearly, this is an extremely well thought out manuscript that is very popular amongst your peers. It is not perfect, but the world you have created is vivid and interesting, and I hope you continue to build upon it. As your writing develops, I can see this coming together well. You are certainly one to watch.

ab<3music

wrote 204 days ago

OH MY GOODNESS! I sat down intending to read the first chapter, or the first ten if I liked it. Four hours later, i've finished the entire book! It is very rare that a book makes me cry, and if I do, I know that it's really good. I cried through the whole book, and I need a sequel! This is beyond amazing, as a Christian, I can relate to it, and I am encouraged by it. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this book, I think that it's one of my favorite books now. I will seriously be telling everyone I know about this, I know a couple of friends that could really use to read it!
Thank you so much for writing this, and making it such a light to others. I have no complaints (this is someone who is a very harsh critic!) and it's going on my picks RIGHT NOW!
~ab<3music

vulcan icarus

wrote 245 days ago

I'm not going to beat around the bush: your talent is breathtaking. My face was mere inches from the screen throughout the entire book.

I love the way you incorporated the Catholic faith. Being a Catholic myself, I can truly appreciate the religious aspects and the wholehearted trust in God that Eliza displays. I have to say my favorite character was her guardian angel. I also love the idea of angels taking animal form; I've read it that way before, but never like this-- with this level of purity and fierceness.

The plot revolving around an angels and demons theme appealed to me greatly. So many books nowadays deal with the supernatural, mystical side of life, but hardly any revolve around The original battle of good vs. evil. The temptations and tauntings were brilliantly executed, and the pull of the God Almighty was evident in every way.

The way the story seems to allude to Shakespeare's Romeo & Juliet was perfect; just enough of their story to be eye-catching, with your eloquent voice rising to fill in the rest with priceless mastery.

It is so rare these days to see talent like yours. Your writing style is so unique and 'pure,' and the imagery employed seems to roll off the tongue like velvet. In fact, I can't remember the last time a story touched me like this one-- perhaps this is the first time.

I have to mention: the chapter of Michael's baptism particularly reached out to me. The part at the end when he sees his guardian angel made me smile with joy-- I felt, literally felt, his uncontained joy. It was beautifully done.

To the matter of being published....All I can say is that if the publishers keep refusing to see the masterpiece that is this story, I will descend upon them as St. Joan of Arc upon the English, fiery sword of doom in my hand.

I wish I could elaborate a bit more on the ways I'm in love with this book, but I really cannot find the words.

So, I take my leave, and add only that I will be impatiently awaiting the arrival of First, to Dream of Love in bookstores.

-Cassi

mscheponik

wrote 250 days ago

AH! I never knew that you added more to this! Oh my goodness, your writing is so beautiful; I love it. And those last couple chapters had me crying so much. The style you write in is so unique, but it's so poetic and flows perfectly together. Your characters all come to life from the story, and I can picture it all in my head as I read, and I love stories that enable me to do that. I really hope that this ends up published because it's killing me being left with the cliffhanger of not knowing how it ends.

cara_ruegg

wrote 275 days ago

The dork that I am, has decided to bring along my authonomy comments hehe. :) I love my authonomites (some of them at least lol)

Not really there wrote:
Such a unique style makes this writer stand out from the rest. Any comparisons to Milton or Shakespeare are substantiated by fine imagery, delivered with a timeless eloquence.
The themes of faith and love are inseparable at their purest level; themes which are proficiently expressed here. All contained within a natural story full of fresh ideas.
From the poetry of Dante, to the storytelling of Dan Brown, the public have never lost interest in the continuing examination of theology - a subject I personally believe should be tested to destruction.
There are times when I wanted to stop and read passages again which is a rare joy for me when reading literature, usually I prefer to just get it over with. First, to dream of love shows that originality and culture constantly evolve. Just when I thought the classics protected against anything new being of real merit, this book shines, revealing the true potential of the author. I just hope there are publishing professionals out there with the vision to take this one on.
The most curious thing this book has so far uncovered is a minority of people who seem opposed to a new direction; and worse still, it would appear there are actually people who think the public don't "get", or want poetry, wherever it appears? I'm glad I don't know any of those kind of people.

The brilliant writer of morningside said:
I love the idea of a guardian angel, and I must tell you, the prologue was fantastic!
The poems you have laced throughout the prologue were beautifully written and I enjoyed reading them (I'm not much of a fan of poetry, but I have nothing against yours, in fact, I loved them!).
It's stories like these I search and search for, but struggle finding. Your description when you say "allowed my white wings to caress the broken night," made me melt completely. I'm so very jealous of your description, and I admire you completely!
You have been backed with pleasure, and I look forward to getting through all 33 chapters you've shared :)
-Ashley

SiCorbz wrote:
Hi Cara. First, to Dream of Love: this is quite astonishing -- astonishingly good, that is! To be honest (and to my eternal shame!) I actually expected this to be far less accomplished -- given your age. So, a big slap in the face and a wake-up call to me not to...er....judge a book (or indeed its author!) by its cover! You write with a poet's rhythm, employing rich descriptions and a evoking a strong sense of atmosphere. Nice appropriation of the R&J Prologue to open the action and very clever recurring usage of the R&J themes and motifs throughout (e.g. the poison Michael takes in Ch 11 and the reference to "loving my enemy" in Ch 13). The dual perspective of alternating narrators works very well and the fantasy landscape they inhabit is beautifully designed. If this book cannot persuade young girls (and others) to dip their toes into the Fantasy genre, then nothing can! And yet the writing (and use of language) is far, far more sophisticated than the typical YA audience would probably comprehend - lending it depth for adult readers (such as yours truly!)! OK, I think I've blown enough smoke in your direction(!)...and from your Profile notes I think you know this all already! Overall: a sophisticated fantasy epic that shows an extraordinary command of language. Shelved, of course -- and I take my metaphorical hat off to you, young lady...you will go far...then, again, you know that already don't you?! ATB Simon

Ruth Francisco wrote:
Flowing freely between dreamscape, archetype, and Arthurian legend, this tale has a moody loveliness that is as lyrical as it is sad. We have seen this dream before, but we never tire of it. Here it is retold with something special, a fierce adolescent yearning that should appeal to the YA audience. Good luck with this.

Francesco wrote:Simply lovely.
Backed...what a heart you must have.

cavicante wrote:
Hello Cara,
Wow!! You are mature beyond your years. You said it all when you said that your writing style was unique. This book read like one long poem, as you are very descriptive and poetic in everything that is read. This book is like a breath of fresh air, that sweeps one off of thier feet. You are truly, a gifted, talented and beautiful writer. I am in total awe of you and your work; and until I find 5 more books to take its place, this book will remain SHELVED!! You are awesome!!

Geveret wrote:
You've got something special here, Cara. This is no mere fiction. In fact, to tag it "fantasy" is a bit of an injustice. It's an allegory about the love of God, told in the form of an exploration of the heart. Love and faith are one, and the depth of both is astonishing and heartbreaking. That you make it work in such human terms is a tribute to your gift as a poet. I've read everything you've uploaded. I long to read more. gobsmacked. Gobsmacked and in tears, feeling blessed to have read it but utterly powerless to accurately describe its beauty and its effect. Truly a "Lord, I am not worthy" moment. Shelved.

Microbe wrote:
Cara, this is beautiful! The story is awesome, what a love story. It is one of the most distinctive books I've read, anywhere. I like your rich language. I'm just so impressed. It is reminiscent of the classics, yet not overdone or pretentious. It works! I admire the confidence you have in your poetic style. It's great.

Inkycreative wrote:
Hi Cara, Obviously you have a wonderful talent for poetry and that style radiates through your prose giving you the thing that so many authors long for; a unique voice. You also have a wonderful imagination and the imagery of the angel becoming wolf, soaring through the snow was stunning.

Soul On Fire

wrote 266 days ago

I just got done with Chapter Three now, and I feel like I'm coming out of a wonderful dream. Your writing has a poetic, innocent, dreamlike quality about it. It's pretty, but it doesn't just SOUND pretty. Every single sentence came brilliantly alive in my head. Your chapters were that atmospheric. And I already feel like I know quite a bit about Eliza and Michael. You really got me inside their heads, and their lives. I could feel nothing short of heaven in Eliza's world, and in Michael's, it was cold and flat and gray, like slate. They are so starkly different. It's going to be interesting to see how they manage to fall in love. The bond between Eliza and her brother is so sweet and beautiful. I can feel the strong bond between them, like I'm part of it myself. If anything happens to him, like you seem to be foreshadowing, my heart is going to shatter right along with Eliza's. I just know it. I can tell that this thing is going to be a gorgeous, tragic story, and I can't wait to read more, as soon as I get the chance. So far, First, to Dream of Love has stolen my heart. I think that's a pretty great start. :-)

-Kara

Narnia Fan

wrote 106 days ago

Well, I'm finished! I guess it's not such a big deal to you anymore, since HarperCollins already read the story, but I greatly enjoyed it. You have a way with words, and no one can deny it! Being a staunch Protestant, I got a little uncomfortable with all the saints and signs of the cross, but considering all the religious things I put in my own stories, (not to mention Jesus' own words!) I'm in no position to judge.
All in all... fantastic job! :)

Narnia Fan

wrote 106 days ago

I'm beginning to get seriously mad at Eliza's parents...

Narnia Fan

wrote 108 days ago

"But it's your favorite, Eliza."
"No, you're my favorite."

I didn't mean to write anything until I was farther along, but that was too sweet. I just couldn't resist telling you how much I loved it! One thing I noticed was "He Reached toward me and lifted my chin up." Reached shouldn't be capitalized. Also, you wrote 'A large crucifix hung over a small alter," which I believe should be "altar." Anyway, I'm fascinated... expect to hear more from me soon!

Meerkat scribbles 24_7

wrote 121 days ago

First of all , I like your writing style . The words flow smoothly and cleanly before my eyes , conjuring up the images within my mind's eye without any hesitation . The chracters are well thought - out , making them appear as if they are flesh and blood , living and breathing people , instead of only words and imagination . The storyline is unique and fresh , making the story appear new instead of something previously read that had already been used and written , wearing out the idea and it's concept . The descriptions are imaginative and colorful , giving life to the chracters and the story itself . The written world appearing real , as if the reader has stepped within the pages , living in a world that doesn't exsist . I haven't been able to read much , but so far I find this book to be appealing and intriguing .
Great job ! Keep up the good work ! :)

Narnia Fan

wrote 121 days ago

I've read the prologue, and plan to read the rest when I've finished The Trees Have Eyes, but so far I like it! I would be a little... okay, more than a little... creeped out if I didn't trust that you're a Christian, and are not going to write about violence and sin for its own sake. Looking forward to the rest!

VictoriaHogan

wrote 121 days ago

First may I say that I read this more out of curiosity than anything else. Secondly, for a first novel this is a fairly good piece of writing. It's readable, with excellent grammar and spelling. I enjoyed it immensely, though I can't really connect with it the way Christan readers can. I myself am a Wiccan, a witch if you will, and frankly I don't have the religious connection many of this work's readers have. However, it was very enjoyable despite this, and I believe it will be appealing to many.You have a light, easy to read writing style that provides easy reading without skimping on the complex sentence structure like a certain wildly popular yet disappointing vampire novel I will not name. Overall, your work was excellent. Five out of five stars!

tianuo

wrote 136 days ago

Yokaishika

wrote 139 days ago

I just wanted to read this story and see what is it about but when i read it , I immediatly liked it!.Just by reading the first chapter, i've been captivated by your talent

jamesenstein31

wrote 154 days ago

I've been reading a few chapters and i'm finally glad to see a historical blood and thunder fantasy with the correct classical prose! This really feels just right with a genuine sense for magic and such. The world, however, is not the joyful fantasy land of many a young writer, but a darkened paradise that could easily substitute as a devil's playground. To slay a child in the prolouge, was a hell of a punch and from there the story jusy builds and does not let up. I have to admit. I find this pretty damn good.

Abbie Spittle

wrote 157 days ago

I have to say i'm a sucker for the whole forbidden romance, you really seemed to show the powerful connection the two lovers had, you have a real talent here you really should pursue this :)

Gerry Mclellan

wrote 157 days ago

This is a novel idea and you have a gift for writing this genre.

Velvet Ice

wrote 167 days ago

Your story appeals to the some of the great myths that lie at the heart of our subconscious. We would all love a guardian angel and most of us want to believe that love conquers all. Your writing is lyrical with strong images. I noted two typos which I think are worth pointing out in case you miss them. 'mould' rather than 'mold' ( or am I being English here and this is US?) plus I think a comma after 'once he is done with her' helps the reader.

Good luck with this and I'n happy to pick it.

neisaf

wrote 170 days ago

I love the new pic for your book! I really like this one better than the other one! :)

Cassie Green

wrote 179 days ago

Good job!
:)
Comment on my work?
Thanks!
-Cassie

HealedMyWings

wrote 185 days ago

CONGRATULATIONS CARA!!! =D You are now officially the author of a Top Pick!!

Cato077

wrote 187 days ago

Ok i read the prologue to get a feel for the piece and then read 39 like you asked. I am very impressed. I could not find anything really wrong with it and your imagery and decriptions are amazing. Oddly my favorite line is the one i like the least. The one about the author of evil wishing to hit her with lightning. This line is poetic and descriptive, so i enjoyed it, though i wonder its place in the story. Perhaps i would have to read the rest of it to understand(which i now plan to, the change in michael is suberb and the imagery breathtaking), but i had to read it several times, and i still dont completely understand. Is there literally a demon wishing to kill her(gods favored) with lightning and risk the displeasure of god? Good work..destined to go on my picks list

Bree Chafin

wrote 187 days ago

i just read the 1st 2 paragraphs of the prologue and i cant stop reading it:)

Poading

wrote 187 days ago

I WAS going to stick it out and not comment until the end, but, well, clearly I didn't. You are amazing. Your writing is so smooth. It's like creamy gelato, or soft cream cheese (can you tell I'm hungry?). You've written this splendidly! Everything flows together so beautifully, every word seems deliberately written and your attention to detail is remarkable! I'll certainly be back to read the rest, but for now I have to sleep. With one day to go until the editorial board reads this, I'll give you my vote in hopes that this stays in the top 5 where it deserves to be! So, until next time,
~Rosiee

jessisay

wrote 187 days ago

if you're not too busy and have time, could you comment on any of my writing, especially my two books: "Miranda's Nightmare" and "Razor Burn"? I'd really appreciate any input you could give me. Your comments would mean lot! Of course I would read more of your writing in return.

<3 Jess

Tracy McCarthy

wrote 187 days ago

Cara, this is exquisite. I have nothing that I could possibly suggest for improvement.
I read the first couple chapters then skipped to the middle then skipped to the end, and it is fluid throughout. Heavy with a thoroughly fleshed out concept. I honestly think this is appropriate for literary fiction of any age. Truly remarkable.
I wish you the very best of luck with this when it rests at the fingertips of the HC Editors.
Will be picked when the shelf opens up.
Tracy

Author S M Johnston

wrote 188 days ago

It reminded me at first of a gothic version of This Present Darkness, which is one of my favorite books. I love that she was dreaming of Michael. I think this will have a huge following if published.

People may beat me over the head for saying this as I know you had a lot of supporters (and this is not to say I didn't enjoy the read - I am still picking it people) but...... Too may sentences starting with 'I' for me. I know it can be hard in the first person but there are ways around it.

plutoisaplanet

wrote 188 days ago

This is incredible! you have some incredible talent right here :) I really love your poetic prose (if that's an apt description), it's really amazing :) I stayed up later than my parents would ever let me just to read your incredible-ness!!!! Your story is so realistic - so descriptive and... woah. :) I hope you take this book places, because it is incredible!!!!

BeeLu

wrote 188 days ago

this is literally amazin. i cant describe how good it is. the discrition, the characters, eveerythin. gd job!!!!!

Firefly93

wrote 188 days ago

Beautiful style!

Mitsomi

wrote 188 days ago

i am silenced. i have no words to describe how well written this was. i might have only read the first chapter but i can already tell you are incredibly talented. i will get back to this as soon as i can. i have to keep reading.
my favorite line in this chapter.."only love defies the nature of a man"
excellent work :D

AllyLeian

wrote 188 days ago

SUPER!

sara4beck

wrote 189 days ago

Wow, I've only read the prologue and first chapter, and this is amazing! I intend to read the rest of it sometime- this is definitely going on my picks! I can see why it's in the top five.

Sara

Gabriela V

wrote 190 days ago

simply amazing. :)

patchy_luvr26

wrote 190 days ago

WOW!!! Bravo...Bravo! This was such a good book. I just intended to read chapter 42, like you said in your author's note, but after I read that chapter I just had to read more. A total of 3 hours, and I finally finished! I cried, I laughed (at parts), and I fell in love. You had me hooked from the beginning lines. I just wanna say: CONGRATZ! You have such a great talent!

xxTokyoxx

wrote 190 days ago

Wow! I have read like three chapters and it is sooooo awesome!

Sarah Dilbeck

wrote 190 days ago

So far this is very creative and detailed; I like your use of words and descriptions! Maybe add a little more thoughts in Eliza's head, I see where you're getting at when she talks about what she knows but I'd like to hear more of her personal opinions and what her as her own character thinks about her situation at hand. Overall, It's beautifly written but could use a little more action to keep the reader interested. It's very interesting so far, but just include more irony, perhaps to keep it easy on the gloom and doom. But I really think your style of writing is very unique and different and is very intelligent. I'll read more when I get the chance, but so far, well done :)

pandora23

wrote 190 days ago

The prologue captures my interest right away! I've only read the first few chapters, but already I can see why this is so popular :) The last sentence of the first chapter "They were silenced; the died but I stayed alive.", is cutting and intense, and I think it sets the story up to be interesting.
You've done a great job and I can't wait to read more :)
-Pandora

Lycanthrope

wrote 190 days ago

And this is the part of the reading where i click the "pick" button

Lycanthrope

wrote 190 days ago

Wow. I read the first chapter so far, and the begining is so powerful it shocked me for a long minute. Awesome Job!

Jake Warner

wrote 190 days ago

Very, very good writing. I saw no mistakes and it all flows very well. Also an interesting and unique story, but not really my thing. Keep at getting it published! It's easily good enough!

sandrachhuon

wrote 191 days ago

The first page alone is so beautiful it seems alomost impossible. I haven't seen words flow so greatly before. I love how right at the beginning you talked about how Love could conquer all because I believe in it too. Your writing is really something unique and please don't stop writing because if I had your talent I would write until I couldn't write anymore.

plutoisaplanet

wrote 191 days ago

I've only read the prologue, but I can tell this will be an amazing story! I can't wait to read more - you are so descriptive I love it!!!!! such vivid imagery......... :)

Grace Forester

wrote 192 days ago

I love your book! I've always liked the Romeo and Juliet romance, but this was different. It was the same forbidden love that I like with an ending I adore. It's an awesome story that I would love to see get published. Great job! :)

HannahMuffins

wrote 192 days ago

The way you have writen this is beautiful. Every sentence flows together with the next and the way you descibe is simple astounding. I love the way you wrote the dialogue. I loved how you wrote about the guy seeing the guardian angel I had a similar expierence when I was ten. I applaude you very much so!

By the way I updated my project "Cherubs Purgatory". I brought in a new character, so when you get the chance tell me what you think.

Don't stop writing!

-HannahMuffins <3

A.P.Pitcher

wrote 193 days ago

You have amazing talent as an author! Beautifully written!!! There sooooneeds to be a sequel! I wish I had your talent, everything about your writing was amazingly wonderful! 7,000 up! D
-A.P.Pitcher
Proud author of: A W O K E N

Shirley R. Kleiner

wrote 194 days ago

Wow, you sucked me into your story, and it will not relinquish me from its grip. I haven't been able to read much, but I will definatley come back to finish it, so please leave it up!! Congratulations! You have made my PICKS!

CueZebra

wrote 194 days ago

Sometimes I write long comments, but i feel that one such as that for a breath taking book like this wouldn't expess my thoughts as potent as I need. Sometimes the less said the more is heard. So here comes my real comment:

This book is beautiful.

Dancing Wolfe

wrote 195 days ago

This was a great beginning! I like the descriptions of the hellish creatures and the Amatorians. It probably needs to be cleaned up a little, but I really like it. You start well, and compel the reader on to the next chapter. And that is not easy to do! Great job!

Dancing Wolfe

wrote 195 days ago

This was a great beginning! I like the descriptions of the hellish creatures and the Amatorians. It probably needs to be cleaned up a little, but I really like it. You start well, and compel the reader on to the next chapter. And that is not easy to do! Great job!

me bite!

wrote 195 days ago

Wow only on like chapter 2 and hooked!

Lauren Ashley

wrote 195 days ago

Oh wow. So this is a published book? Duh. Would you mind giving me some pointers to the publishing world? I'm new to this and am writing a novel, hoping that it will get published. I haven't uploaded it to the site yet because it's still a rough draft. But would you mind reading "The Tripoli Chronicle" and giving me feedback? I'd really appreciate it! Thank you! Keep up the amazing work! Good job!

Vargot

wrote 195 days ago

This a beautifully written story with tons of detail and wonderful imagery. I want this to stay in the top five. You deserve a review from Harper Collins and after the mishap of last month I send all the luck your way. Good luck honey! Added!

silverherring

wrote 195 days ago

Very awesome! I'm not even religious, but I can still love the way you thread spirituality so effortlessly into a story, and how you characterize the polar opposites of evil and good and then intertwine them! Love it!

klummzie

wrote 195 days ago

Wow I loved just the first chapter!! Can't even imaging what the rest is like! Ha I will add it to my watch list! But when I like a book I read the whole thing and yours looks worthy!! Haha lol! The subject is unbelieveable to most but I really like it. And from what I can tell you write in a very realistic manner. So I'm excited to get to 52!

Candycane

wrote 195 days ago

I just read the prologue and oh my goodness is it good. I will deffinetly read more, but sadly I havta get ot bed. I'll read more tomorrow! ^.^