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Rank 539 (-6)
Word Count
10357
Date submitted
12.01.2009
Date Updated
by AmandaJoywrites
Book: Romance, Humor
Lord Joseph couldn’t take his eyes off my cleavage; I couldn’t keep my hands off my fish fork. Whilst we dine, I plan his death.
Sofia is not a normal girl, not by most people's standards at least. Her family is very famous, her home country is very small, she lives in a castle, and her brother will be a king one day. Also, she's kind of a princess. If, you know, you like titles and all that mess.
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wrote 73 days ago
She is evil and I love it!!! Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
wrote 79 days ago
You spell 'Sofia' and 'Sophia', you keep on switching those two.
wrote 176 days ago
this is great! please update it!
wrote 182 days ago
This is AMAZING!!!! Pleeease update!! You're a brilliant writer!!
wrote 203 days ago
okay honestly, i wasn't sure if i liked this story at first. for me it had to sink in. and now that i've been able to think about the story: your main character, Sofia, is genius.i'm really looking forward to reading more!and if you could, would you please take a look at my story? i'd be really thankful for the feedback! =)
wrote 212 days ago
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE :D
wrote 221 days ago
When are you gonna update....?
wrote 223 days ago
I. Love. Sofia. So. Much. Right. Now. <3
wrote 230 days ago
i've only read the first chapter and i'm really enjoying the cattiness, but i'm confused about the change from formal to informal as well as from present to past tense.
Your short pitch remind me of "Catherine Called Birdy", a book I LOVED.
wrote 231 days ago
Please update!! :p
THIS IS MY FAVORITE BOOK ON INKPOP, HANDS DOWN!!! Finally, something that actually has realistic dialogue, even if it's formal and coming from a total meanie, I love the cussing! And how you start out with a popular culture reference. I would buy this book in a heartbeat just because it's not some paranormal romance or wishywashy piece of Romance! You need to start sending query letters girl!!
This is awesome. It's fun and fresh. I love that she is a b*tch and will own up that she is one! Well done, please update soon!
wrote 234 days ago
It's funny.
wrote 235 days ago
This story in theory shouldn't work because the protagonist is horible, and yet I kept reading so good on ya. not easy.--side note: the language is weird. so formal at times but then you use the word "fucking" polar spectrum language.
I really like how this is fantasy and truth all in one. The main character is awesome I love how she is a b*tch and isn't afraid to admit to it. :D
wrote 236 days ago
this reminded me of cruel intentions at the start!! :Di picked up some spelling and phrasing that was a bit off but you could easily correct that with spellcheck (or rereading)i added it to my picks! let me know when you update!!
This is really good! I'm loving it already ... Please update soon on all of your books!
wrote 237 days ago
I love how you write about everything... i'm supposed to be studying for finals but was completely hooked after the first sentence and have been reading for way too long. Can't wait for more, and keep up the good work!
i reali enjoy ur style of writing well done keep me updated
wrote 241 days ago
I am in love with Sophia after only one chapter - love that she's a bad ass :Pcan't wait to read move, it's amazing
I thought this was pretty interesting. Your character definitely is very fun to follow. She has such an attitude. lol. Your story is funny and well written. Keep up the good work
wrote 242 days ago
I really like you're style of writing and the story line is good. It could benefit from some editing, I saw a few mistake that could easily have been missed. Try reading it to yourself outloud and you'll catch more.
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