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Rank 15 (-1)
Word Count
17301
Date submitted
12.05.2009
Date Updated
01.16.2010
by mimi11052003
Book: , General Fiction, Romance, Humor
Finding out you’re getting married to a prince on your birthday is never that great of a surprise. Or is it?
Maria been engaged since birth, and found out from her parents on her eighteenth birthday. And she is not happy, not in the least. She’s getting married to a boy she’s known since she was six. Who disliked her for no good reason. She hasn’t seen him for two years and now she’s engaged to him! Maria’s made a promise to herself not to fall in love with Prince or his charm. Or at least she’s gonna try. **My book is currently being edited and looked over. Please, be patient with the constant updates. :)**
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wrote 226 days ago
I want to say thank you to EVERYONE who nominated my book or voted for The Bride and Her Prince in the 1st Annual Inkie Awards. I just got the message today that I won the Category of "Best Romance" I can't tell you guys how much it means to me. How much you guys have supported my book just blows my mind. And I'd like to give a huge shout out to everyone who inspired me to keep writing when I just wanted my book to jump off a cliff or something. You guys helped me turn my itsy bitty short story into a great joy in my life. And I thank you all very much.-Melinda
wrote 235 days ago
O MY GOSH !! IT HAD ME CRYING !!!!!! AND I DONT CRY EASILY !! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME THERES GOING TO BE MORE ? I WOULD HATE TO HAVE IT BE FINISHED ~!!! PLEASE ! KEEP GOING !!!!
wrote 7 days ago
Found this out of the blue--- and I loved it! this is an awesome story and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. Some of it flows a little choppy, kind of at the beginning, but in the end everything makes sense. I think that I'm looking for something along the lines of how Maria is feeling throughout this whole ordeal. I was hoping this was her first plane ride or something. I actually read through the entire thing and I LOVED IT. Picked! if you have any questions, let me know, I'd be happy to help you out with your story!Jen
wrote 9 days ago
this is a great storyi want more as soon as you can get more!its so great
wrote 10 days ago
I like this storyit's so cutei've only read through ninebut i'm coming back!
wrote 14 days ago
OMG THIS BOOK IS OMG ITS LIKE AWESOME PLZ TELL ME THERE IS MORE!!!!!!
wrote 15 days ago
wow. wow. WOW! please write more! please please please! this book is amazingly unbelievably amazing! i love this book!
wrote 17 days ago
really good book. You are an awesome writer.. I cant wait to read more of this book when you add more hopefully that will be soon very soon well i really wanted to tell you that i enjoyed this REALLY great book and i really cant wait to hear more and if you do add more hopefully its soon i was hoping you would tell me when yo did so i knew well thanks.. _LINDSEY_
wrote 24 days ago
will it ever be finished? you can email me the finished projected so it don't get plagerized!
Please please update!!!! ive been waiting for the next chapter for everrrr
wrote 28 days ago
My dear, it has been too long. You must update soon, a lot of us are just plain cranky waiting. Anyways, I love your story and please don't give up on it.With best wishes~*~Row~*~
wrote 31 days ago
when are you going to up date ?
wrote 32 days ago
is there more, is there more, please say theres more.
wrote 36 days ago
When are u goin to update??? its so good!!:)
wrote 41 days ago
when are you posting the rest?????
wrote 55 days ago
I love this please keep going
wrote 58 days ago
Very cute:)But I wish the chapters were longer! And I kind of like-hate Maria; she kind of seems conceited :|Otherwise I like this book, and am keeping it on my watch list:)
wrote 60 days ago
UGH! This is SUCH a good story! I'm sooo mad that I could only read to chapter 20! ;_; I stayed up until 4 am reading this last night cause I couldn't put my laptop down! And Now today I finish what's written! PLEASE tell me there's going to be more!
wrote 61 days ago
loved the story line but thought it all kinda happened rly fast but it was a great story want to know the ending now
wrote 62 days ago
Chapter two – Setting?? Where does she live? Obviously, her parents are rich. (Eight Prada bags, really?) Maria’s likeability factor went WAY down in this chapter. She seems like a spoiled brat. I’m going to keep reading, though. Chapter three – “I wonder how he got my number.” She just said a few sentences earlier that she knows he has her number… Chapter four – “There are flowers everywhere. I even see a garden in the distance.” Redundant. If she’s know the king and queen for so many years, how did she not know they were royal?? When she begins speaking about the room she’s in, she needs to walk there first. I think that your story needs a bit more action. The characters need to be physically walking, moving, etc. That way it’s not all about Maria’s thoughts. Why is the closet already full of clothing if she’s bringing eight pieces of luggage with her?! Why are there tiaras in the closet already? Is she a princess or not? Final thoughts before I go for now. Maria needs more depth to her. Her life revolves around fashion and how hot (or not) Daniel is. She needs a hobby or something. I’m putting this on my watch list for now and I hope to add it to my Top Picks soon but I think it needs a little work. Please let me know if you want more comments or would prefer that I just drop dead. -MelissaTHE SEVENTH BLESSING
Hello! I will make comments as I read. First of all, I like your pitch. It is well written. Chapter One - I think you need to make it clear that it's modern day. I was first reading this thinking, "This isn't how they spoke in the "Golden Age" but then I realized it's modern day when you said "internet." Establish a time frame and a setting (where does she live?). Why is she engaged to a prince? Is she a princess? If she isn't, why a prince? If she is a princess, why is she so shocked to be engaged to a prince? I think this story has a lot of potential but some groundwork needs to be laid in Chapter One. :)I'm on to Chapter Two now. -Melissa
wrote 64 days ago
Amazing!!! And I need MORE!!! The only thing is that your chapters are short, make them longer and update SOON!!:)
wrote 65 days ago
Hahaha! I love the beggining, and it really caught my attention.I like the plot so far, and I think you will get a really good story out of this! *wink*A little random (the plot is) if you ask me... =) LOL!Please keep writing!Rhose Whyte
wrote 66 days ago
Wow. This isn't a swap read so I'm sorry if its not very long. I just randomly came accross your book, and I'm so glad I did. Its so great :) I love it. I love the tension between Daniel and Maria. And the added twist of having Alex and Vicky there, plus the twist with Anna. Ingenious. Job well done :)
wrote 70 days ago
i've read The Bride and Her Prince 'til ch. 20.IAnd i'm wondering when you'll be able to udate....
wrote 73 days ago
plz update sooon!
wrote 74 days ago
love it so far
i love DANNY!!!!
wrote 78 days ago
AHH WRITE MORE!
wrote 86 days ago
is there more
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!! IS THERE MORE?????
wrote 87 days ago
I really like this. It's interesting and funny and I LOVE Daniel. He's a genuine Prince Charming...among other things I won't mention right now. Please, please update! I would really like to read some more!Sometimes the tenses are a bit mixed up. The story is in present tense, but sometimes you write in past tense, and I don't mean the flashbacks.Also, Maria seems a little self-conceited sometimes. I'm not sure if she is joking or what, but she keeps saying how beaitiful and sexy etc she is.There are some things about the story that seem a little unrealistic... For example, would Margarita really go af to boarding school and miss her best friend's marriage? And some things about the royal family also seem a bit unrealistic.If you update and finish the story, I will go through the story chapter by chapter and give you a complete review if you want.But I really like this and you write really well! PLEASE update!
wrote 88 days ago
when will u update again i reali wanr more
wrote 102 days ago
I just finished reading the first two chapters of this book and I love it. It's so great, this is my type of book :D I love that you wrote it in a very relaxed and casual way.
wrote 103 days ago
This is so great. The betrayal, the hurt, it makes me feel like I'm Maria. It's great! Awesome writing!
wrote 109 days ago
please update! =)
wrote 112 days ago
I really like this... a lot. Even though it probably could have been written better, the story itself is pretty interesting. There's just this one thing that was bothering me.If Maria and the pince have been engaged since they were babies, why would they have ever been allowed to date anyone other than the person they're engaged to? Even if neither the prince or Maria knew they were going to marry each other, don't you think the parents would have prohibited them from dating? It wouldn't do them any good if Maria or the prince were to fall in love with someone else, only to find out that they can't be with that person. That would only leave that person more miserable than needed.Other than that one thing, I really enjoyed. I wish you luck with finishing it!
wrote 118 days ago
When i read this book i could hardly stop reading it. The way you wrote it... Wow good job!!!If you write anymore please tell me i would absolutely love to read more!S.L.D.S
wrote 119 days ago
WHHHHHHYYYYYYYY aren't you completing it?
wrote 128 days ago
first chapter is very interesting (: going back for more now
wrote 130 days ago
MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLZ WRITE SUM MORE!!!!!!!!!!
wrote 133 days ago
hey. i absolutly love the story!! please update it!!
wrote 137 days ago
Wow, love the plot. A princess engaged since birth, and the twist: she doesn't like the fiance. Thats funny :) I love how down-to-earth the main character is, and she's stubborn too."I will not fall in love with His Royal Highness, Prince Daniel Jose Rodriguez" < I like this, it says a lot for her character. She has a great sense of humour, and I think that it's wonderful how you've used royal family (which most people use with old-fashioned storys) and made the girl very, well, nonroyal :) It definitely made me like her more."But from the pictures on the internet, he's not bad looking. In fact, he's pretty hot." Love this.You're a great, chatty writer with a very captivating writing technique.Great story,Alanaa x x
Hi everyone! First off, I'M SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING!! It's been really hectic these last couple of months for me and my family. But now that everything is starting to calm down I hoping to start writing again. I'm a first class loser for not updating and I can only hope you forgive me. -Melinda
wrote 138 days ago
Thanks for writing something so great! I'm not a romance novel person, but your unique humor made me smile and kept me reading. I love it! Keep up the great work!
wrote 139 days ago
You need to update this.. I would still like to know the ending. :) aha.
wrote 146 days ago
I love this it's a little ruff and i respect that you are still editing it. If you need any help with that I would love to give you my thoughts. When i first read the summary i thought it was going to be really lame but i loved it there was so much i did see coming. you have an amazing style that is so different from a lot of stuff i have read. I cant wait to see what happens next :)
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