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86

Date submitted

05.30.2010

Date Updated

05.31.2010

God's Light

by Dark_Angel0216

Poem

A poem about God

A poem that I wrote on a Jesus-high!!! Late at night is when inspiration hits the hardest.

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Emmanuel Jimenez

wrote 52 days ago

I wonder why no one else has commented on this? This feels like it was pondered over, yet spontaneous. Like you were siezed by an emotion and you had to hurry or you would lose the moment. This isn't bad. I like it. It's mellow. And it describes what it's like to be with God.

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