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Rank 10584 (-93)
Word Count
290
Date submitted
07.11.2010
Date Updated
08.08.2010
by kbj
Poem
A short pitch would ruin it.
A full pitch would ruin it.Here are some words instead.Music,Sanity,Voice,A bond,A concert...
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wrote 56 days ago
I think to make the flow better, you should add puncuation. It also tells us how you wan't us to read your poem. Other than that, I think this is really good. The message is so strong... and it really makes you think. Great Job. Samantha
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