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Rank 3850 (-65)

Word Count

3924

Date submitted

12.22.2009

Date Updated

01.07.2010

Don't Forget to Lock the Door

by shadowpaws

ShortStory: General Fiction, , Horror

Jess and her friends had a sleepover, but they forgot to lock the doors.

Jess, Elena, Liz, and Grace were having a great time hanging out at Liz's house. Taking pictures, talking, all the fun sleepover stuff. It just figures that they should being swiped from the house and taken to warehouse to be sold, abused, and killed. All because they didn't lock the doors...

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daughteroflight

wrote 68 days ago

oh my goodness. That's really sad, but you did a really good job with this.

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s-jessy-s

wrote 91 days ago

Roachie this is like the coolest story ever! =) I mean what happened to them sucks but its cool they stayed together even though they were all being killed at seperate times its still cool. Okay thats my comment =P

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Living Pearl

wrote 174 days ago

jeezum, rach... intense. i like it. sorry i didnt read it sooner :)

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