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Rank 1304 (-22)
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112
Date submitted
01.02.2010
Date Updated
01.04.2010
by photosnapper
Poem
no emotion behind, just something to read for giggles or something cute. Enjoy!
This poem title came to my head because I had to think of a character to use, so i wanna make a poem using this title.
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wrote 249 days ago
Thanks you guys for all the feedback! Keep it comin! It's all very much appreciated<3Holy shanga langa ding dong. Top 100? I am number 198. And it's a poem! Holy cow guys. Thanks!! Keep the picking and the watching coming!! Feed backk!!!<3~Em
Oh my goodness ... this is hilarious!!! Honestly, I am cracking up, I love this SOoo much!!! "Hello Mr. Worm and he tipped his hat"I can see this whole little story perfectly. It takes a unique brain to write such a piece! Well done! ~Morgan
This was so cute, and I was smiling the whole way through. Thanks for making my day! lol
wrote 250 days ago
aw this is so unique. I usually read depressing or really happy poetry but you've somehow mixed humor into it and I think that's brilliant. You did a great job and everything flowed nicely. Very nicely done. I shall put this on my WL to add to my picks later. Keep me updated when you post some more stuff. x
wrote 121 days ago
Wow. i really enjoyed this. it has a wonderful tone and is a good cheer-er-upper. good job!
wrote 154 days ago
Hehe cute..i lik it
wrote 194 days ago
haha cute
wrote 202 days ago
haha that it's adorable.if you edited a bit and added pictures it could be a children's book. :)
This is sooo cute! I love it! It's funny, cute, amazing, awesome, excellent, and all these other adjectives that I could list but I don't want to right now. Haha. It's just too cute! Next time I have an apple I might look for a man worm :PMore, more, more!!!
wrote 205 days ago
I love it! This is cute, clever, and brillant. It is so simple but something about it isn't. Wonderful work!-TM
wrote 212 days ago
Aha this is great[: who said poems have to be deep and emotionally connected!?
Verrry unique! It definately places an image in my head! Good job!
wrote 220 days ago
This was HILARIOUS! The part where the worm hits you made me laugh! When you said this was for a giggle you were certainly right!
wrote 243 days ago
This is adorable; You have a great imagination that ranges, and all your poems flow nicely. Keep up the excellent work :)(Sorry it took me awhile to get to your poems)
wrote 245 days ago
Looking at the title i would have never guessed i would be reading a poem about a worm and an apple. lol.
lol this is cute :]
wrote 246 days ago
That was a cute poem.It painted a perfect picture in my mind while i was reading it.Great job!
This is really cute,it seems like something you would see in a book like where the side walk ends. i love it~Sami
Lol. Reminds Me Of My Friend Angel. Lol. Such A Cute Little Peom. Nice Choice Of Wording. And It Also Made Me Think Of Alice In Wonderland.^^
wrote 247 days ago
that was so cute! i loved it!!!
This was rly cute!!! :)
hahah love it.
Now this is a really nice poem! Poems are simply an overflow of the imagination, and you have no trouble seeing that.
This is funny, and cute. I do think you could do more with it, if you wanted to. It has a children's book quality to it, and perhaps you could expand it into that sort of a thing. Maybe 150 words, tops.
Wow that was good..that had me laughin
lmao that was great. Random ideas are always the best. Can't wait for more :)
Hm. Odd. In a good way <3 I can't really explain it any better. To be honest, I haven't decided what I think of it yet!-Mira
Quite freakish. In a good way, of course :) Poems like this are so rare; it's refreshing to read something so spontaneous and weird. I would consider italicizing the dialogue so it's very clear that someone's talking. Other than that, no complaints! A joy to read.
Ha ha, thats pretty funny. Made my night!Fresca
this is really a cute story, and mister worm sounds very nice!!!
wrote 248 days ago
This is so cute, I love the line"Why did this man worm Like apples?"
This was so funny!! I don't normally like this kind of poetry, but this time it was hilarious!! I was laughing the whole time, and I loved how you put "noggin" in there. My fave word!! Loved this loved this loved this!!! You totally made my day-- thank you :)
hahaha I loved it. Your poem was light hearted and funny, usually not my style but refreshing
lol, nice, a real day brightener!-Bri
haha "Cause i don't need hands to eat it" that was cute
Very clever!! I would have never thought to write a poem about that. It's a great poem!! The only thing I could suggest for this one is maybe a little more decriptive word choice.
This is really adorable! It made me chuckle, hahaha.
Nice, and light, I like it!
XD Ahahaha! Pahahaha! That was too funny! The concept is so cute, and the "tip of the hat" motion is adorable. I love the voice you gave to this project, it was classic.
For the first time I'm complete stuck for words... I don't know what to say to that. Weird and funny maybe. Were you a little heavy handed with the flu medicine that night?Leigh FallonThe Carrier of the Mark
funny! i loved it! :D :D :D :D
:) sooo cute :P
This made me laugh! You did a good job. I also believe this was creative.
I love it! The word choice is so cute. I can picture every bit of it. :)
I like this poem.you know this would be great for kids too. I read it to my only 3 kids and they loved it.great job
This is so cute and funny! Love it!- Lindz :)
Lol, I liked it =3
This is so adorable! I like how it's almost a nursery rhyme. I'm so glad to read a poem that isn't depressing or about love and heartbrake. I also like the end, about leaving the worm to his apple of the day. It is very cute. Great job! =)
This is different from any poetry I've ever read and I absolutely love it. It's so fun and funny to read. This actually lighten my day. I couldn't help, but smile.
Different, yet good!
Aww thats was cute! =3
I love how the worm hit you with his cane! The poem is very funny but the poem is set up very oddly. It kind of disrupts the flows of it. Try organizing it a bit. FLow and rythmn is very important!
It was fairly decent, not really my type of poem.good work though
This is adorable! I can SEE the worm tipping his hat and beating his cane. xDVery unique! This makes me unexplainably happy. :) Like bubbles. Hehe.
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