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Rank 2167 (-37)
Word Count
105
Date submitted
01.04.2010
Date Updated
by Charles Pendelton
Poem
I extracted this poem from my book, The Embryo Man.
I wrote it while walking in the land of the shadow dwellers.
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wrote 178 days ago
Nice imagery. You have a good way with words.
i really liked this. it sucked me in. great work :)
wrote 204 days ago
This is even better again, I think my mind is syncing with your work the more I read. I love this. Leigh
wrote 205 days ago
That was great... really dark. It gave me chills :) Very good description. This is so powerful... Love it love it!!
This is great! It really makes the reader feel that "haunting and dark" aura. It plays very well with the different elements of darkness and ties them in very neatly to create the kind of poem that gives you a nice little light chill when read. And I must agree with JaquieC and Cassie Smith, the way you ended it with "Am I to die in this padded room?" was a brilliant exit for your poem. Well done!
wrote 206 days ago
*claps* yay! Absolutely amazing, again! You have a true talent. Keep it up,and thanks for sharing :D
I agree with Cassie Smith. This is amazing and slightly dark. 'in this padded room?' -creepy. God bless,...,
wrote 207 days ago
SO GOOD! I love how dark it is, and yet I can relate. It's like I've been in this other world before, felt that padded room. This is spectacular.
wrote 208 days ago
Aaah!!! I SOOoo love this piece! I love the dark feel to it ... it's beautiful ... now I have to read more of your stuff!
Thank you so much!
This is so powerful and meaningful. The poem flows majestically. I applaud you.
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